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Lyrical
At the beginning i didn't know what to think but after reading about 60 chapters i really like it.
Please continue it until the end.
DO NOT DROP IT!!!
As i said,i really like it and i'd prefer to read it until the end.
Keep up the good work,author!
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ShuraTheDestroyer
I really liked this novel, it is rare to find a novel of dxd that is not the same formula repeated 99% of the time. And luckily the mc is not that kind of character with those totally generic personalities of animes. The story is progressing very well, the updates are at a good pace. The only problem was grammar, but it was only in the older chapters, now everything is fine. I recommend it, it's really a good story to spend time reading.
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MythicalFanFicGod
Would be much higher if author didn't keep on using demons instead of what it is, devils. Not to mention the stupid cringe self-important arrogant MC.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Fate_Averruncus
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Culture_Lover
Alguien aquí con vida? xd
Sería un bonito sueño el que esta historia se actualizara, aún mantengo la esperanza de que es ocurra :'v ..............................
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Oji_san_ecchi
ah sayang sekali novel ini dropped
padahal dari segi cerita bagus semua, alurnya dapet, latar belakangnya juga dapet, ditambah ada suasana sedih, ceria dan semua dapet, hufft, sayang sekali....
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Lucyfera
this novel is great. the characters are well thought out there are great interactions and even the fights are interesting to read. my only complaint is that it is unfinished
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Christ_Apostle
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InternetSaint
cringe 'with a SYSTEM' story.
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Zeke_Ackerman
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AntiWorldSystem
Weak MC. .. .useless system .. Beta MC. .. .. Spicy Chicken MC. .. .. Naive MC. .. .. Brainless author .. ... .. Fucking shitty trash novel .. .. ..
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Seawolfe
Great concept all around and good work on building different dimensions. Where this story comes into problems is with gender. Even in the same sentence you have a obvious female wife referred to as "he" or the MC referred to as she or her then two words later again as a male. This makes it kind of confusing especially in the later chapters when Yukio has a bigger harem.
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EmersedCobra561
I was shocked when started reading this at first I was like what is going on with this MC but deeper into the story I started to like it please keep up the great work but fix the He and She please
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lovemeganegals
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Elee_Espino
Rid the meeting going in to work today the last day the week except Tuesday and Thursday are you going in for a good day the weekend and I will
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OgreFrost
Another good sh1t that got down the drain, why the fvck authors like you guys makes novel like this with a good story, even if its just a fanfic, and drop it midway, if you guys think that you dont get anything to qidian then make some patr3on or something, if you think that you cant write a good sentence in every paragraph that you made then why not ask for your readers if they can help you for free? There are a lot of them that can understand that english is not your native language, just give them the gist of the story that you want to make and i'm sure they will help you edit those
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QueenEsdeath
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Piotr_Uklejewski
******************************** Good work! ******************************************
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4bidienkingdom
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
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Rain_Miko
Can't wait u comeback again and im waiting for good battle our mc with adventure and not to forget get more harem and milf from other fiction and god 😂 😂
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AsianLadyBoy
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FanFicFun
The author is a Fucking idiot and is making the mc stupid!!!!
DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!DONT READ!!! DONT READ!!!
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Solarc18
Love the story line! Cant wait to see MC get Sona and Serafall! I also hope that Irinas story doesnt end there, she should be able to be happy too!
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TheEndOfAllThings
Well too much harem ........................................................................................................................
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JadePanda003
I must say that the story is entertaining to read. Though the editing is sloppy, and gender identification in some sentence was not accurate. Thank you for sharing us this novel and keep up the good work! I look forward to more of your works in the future~
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ArgosYesu
A disappointment. Grammar is terrible, the plot is questionable, fights are boring, POV switches are hell.
The biggest issue for me is the POV scenes. Basically scenes where we see things from the POV of other characters. The problem is the author choosing first person POV for those scenes. Writing quality is already subpar in third person yet the attempt at first person can only be called disastrous. Doesn’t help most of these POVs are from a female’s POV so its doubly worse to read.
Now, I probably wouldn’t mind if specific chapters were put aside in dedication to POV scenes, but this doesn’t happen. POV suddenly appears in a chapter. A chapter is called “POV” but ends up changing to the normal plot halfway through so you can’t legitimately skip the chapter.
Bah, for those willing to waste their time on a crappy gtl of a Spanish fanfic.
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Culture_Lover
seguirá en pausa esta novela???? esta buena!!!! me gusta el desarrollo del mundo y del personaje, como va la historia hasta ahora, así que no la dejes caer y continúa, o al menos dinos cuando planeas regresar
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