Reviews of A Hero's Journey by SlyOW - Webnovel

chapter 37 ruined the story

La primera historia que leí de este tipo y la que me engancho, gracias a esta historia conocí webnovel ......................La primera historia que leí de este tipo y la que me engancho, gracias a esta historia conocí webnovel

Horrible, I am speechless for this terrible story, it started out as something nice, the MC was unreasonably weak, but it was acceptable, but, from chapter 25 onwards the chapters were total rubbish, I read them hoping it would improve, but no It got even worse and instead of being a fanfic it became a pathetic and unreasonable mental comedy. I just want to say that I am disappointed in the author for ruining this story more than it already was.

Me parece muy bien ala historia,ojalá sigas con esta teoría ,pero consulta,el protagonista de las historias que vas a hacer será el mismo que el que está teoría de yo en Marvel?

Most story started with bad grammar and then it got better but yours is the reverse. Yours started with acceptable grammar and it progressively got even worse. Congrats, that is a first. Sorry, everything were bad across the board. Why do you do this?

You got a Vote from me, keep up the good work author sama. This seems good to me. Dont drop dont drop dont drop Dont drop Dont drop Dont drop

This is one of the best marvel fanfic that I have ever red it is a shame that it was dropped 😢😢😢. You should continue it, because it is worth reading.

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I love this fanfic.hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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It was enjoyable to read. It became disappointing as I continued on at the end. If possible author please rewrite it and keep it as it was before, it would have made it a good series to read.

I don’t know how to rate this story, it started out so underwhelming I planned to drop it but decided to stick around for a power up, kept getting nerfed so I waited, very boring btw, finally oz serum so mc got decent but still underwhelming and then out of fucking nowhere a god comes up, mc gains omnipotence and then loses all his power and he gets a fucking voice in his head, A FUCKING VOICE IN HIS HEAD WHATTTTT ARREEE YOU FUCKING THINKING????

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It was ok at the start but takes a noise dive mid way through and became pretty bad. The story would have been better if it was less rushed.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

This story is a great addition to Marvel universe .I love how the different character from each story line come together .will wait with baited breath for the next installment 😎😎😎.

Story was so good but at chapter 30 something the author just said f*ck everyone and everything. The story went to complete sh*t and turned into garbage. Ugh such a great story ruined by another author

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I really can't decide if it is good or bad, so many inconsistency in the story.. hope the author improves it. I really can't decide if it is good or bad, so many inconsistency in the story.. hope the author improves it.

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I enjoyed every part of this story. Well can't blame you for its immature ending because I feel that you have lost interest in the story. I just wanted to say that I really loved your work and am really sad it came to an end. Well good luck with your new story, I will look forward to it and good luck.

this story was amazing. i really hope you continue, or make a part two. this might just be my favorite story here. 1401401401401401401401401401040140

Honestly I was hoping for another new world, this is not another new world, it says in the description how to the world change with mason tunt? Basically nothing changes because he looses all his powers whilst fighting something never in the original story and this side lines him for the rest of the original story it seems like a cheap way out of not having to continue writing this, which I guess is the same with new world where you ended it before we saw his full potential if I'd have anything to compare this story to I'd compare it to those 1 season anime which have potential but the mangaka got bored of writing it so the series stopped, but then again those usually have believable power ups. LIKE HE GAINED SO MUCH FKING POWER BECAUSE HE WANTED TO SEE A GIRL HE MET THE DAY EARLIER! Like that reason is a **** version of why issei from DxD has power ups.