Chapter comments on the chapter Birth of the Prince of Chaos of the book The Red Titan

dont know about story but there is one thing I m sure of author is an Otaku🇯🇵🙇🎮 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

thanks for the Chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters

I meant Wonder woman

yo I don't really care all I just want is woman woman romance I'm pretty sure I haven't seen none dc fanfics out there so

Clas, I hope you don't quit. Will there be romance??? If it is, then I'm for the Scarlet Witch.

The first chapter is good, some grammar mistakes there like nearly half of the sentences aren't capitalized, also : basically starts a new sentence so again capitalization and it looks better to have a space between : and ". Others I already pointed out when I read the chapter. Anyway like I said the first chapter shows that this has potential so I'll continue reading and I'll point out any grammatical mistakes I notice.