Amazing story. Will sadly be better than anything I make. 4 out of 5. Read this. You should read this. Nothing else to say.................................
Since I'm the first reviewer, I'll put a good note.
From a little slice of life and comedy with fishies and snakes to some kind of mystery or suspense when the protagonist...no spoilers here.
If you love a unique story with elements of fantasy and modern times, this is the book for you.
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To the author:
The slang and writing style is fine, but that's not the point. The grammar needs some work or just an editor.
Honestly, rather than a fantasy, it feels like a magical realism due to its modern elements. But who knows, maybe it is a fantasy. It's too early to tell.
Love the cover minus the cropped part on the top half (he's missing half a nose, hmm). The synopsis needs a bit of editing, try asking someone to help you with that.
It has a good start and I'm looking forward to more. I actually did laugh at the funny parts btw.
Keep it up Author! >3</
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