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Jamison_C
Honestly, its the first time I've read a gender bender so I really do not know what to expect.
Nevertheless, this story is tinged with darkness especially regarding the male in female body section. Readers not fond of such settings are advised to steer clear.
Author's writing is fine and the themes convey themselves clearly through his writing.
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90751052
Yay Gender Benders and Body Swaps!
Unlike most gender benders filled with comedy, this story gives a darker and more suspenseful approach. It has a really interesting premise with the situation switch. One dives into misfortune while the other has a moment of luck. Only 3 chapters were out when I wrote this review, so I can't say much. Grammar is fine, but there are awkward sentences.
Keep it up, author! >3</
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elfriche
This isn't like your average happy-go-lucky gender bender comedy. So if you can't take darkness, then this is not for you. This is a dark story depicting the tale of a girl that grew up abused by her own father. One day, our male lead wakes up to suddenly being female, while confused, his "father" walks in and the abuse begins. On the other hand, you have our female lead, used to being shackled within the confines of the room, how will she react to this foreign body with a ******* she never had? The limit being one week, will the male lead manage to save the girl from her abuse? What will happen to the father? Let us find out.
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Vegito_Blue
Nothing better to end a day with good ol gender bender and a little touch of racism, rape and paedophilia eh doc? It's a feckin 14 yo doc. A. 14. YO...But I must say, good start. I think of myself as a cultured gourmet of dark cuisine such as this and I have never met similar. The writing too. With such apt descriptions, I can practically picture the scene vividly. I wish you an easy writing
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