I recommend the story!!!
There are some parts that are more strange and seem to be put only to give mystery to the story, but in the end everything comes together nicely, even if it seems a bit rushed
I would very much like to be able to read the adventures of the little dragon and Osamu β€
I really enjoy reading this book[img=recommend] I love the ML and FL's character. They are savvy. and also glad that it is a short chapter without unneccesary twist.
the story start out well but at a moment I get the impression that the author didn't which way to go and start changing the whole story. Some characters with potential just disappear and some plots are left unfinished.
I finished the book but was really disapointed by the ending
definitely recommend this book, i live the story so much, i wish there was more please write a story for long'er.[img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]
This has been such a good story! I'm sad that I've reached its end...π I'm so glad I came back to ot after finally getting coins again!!! I had abandoned it for a while and just enjoyed free reading, but was able to easily jump right back in. Oh how I wish I had my own Zi Shang! π₯°
A lot of broken paragraphs but the original writing itself has a very good quality. The idea itself is good, the characters are also great, the plot remains to be seen (I haven't read that far, sorry)
Excelente historia me encanta fue muy buena y nada aburrida ademΓ‘s los personajes son una cosa bΓ‘rbara en especial la protagonista es una mujer muy astuta
I love this πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I really like how the story started. The premise of the storyline was promising, but somehow I felt the development of the story fell so short at the second half of the book. It was flat out boring at the end. This is another case of the Author just "want to end the story quickly and be done with it" syndrome. If done right, the story could've grown into something promising and well constructed quality novel. On the plus side, I enjoyed the FL's character development and rise to power, which was constructed well and gage reader's interest to her personal growth. The politics & scheming behind almost everything was interesting to read. However, the ML is quite different, not your usual ML & thats what made the overall plotline interesting
The background world was slightly dismal. The beginning part where Yun Jiuge lived before was alright, you could imagine the scenario of the ancient Chinese world and costumes, but after that, talking about different "continent" or world, it became a mess, except for the "beast world" which I enjoyed. The introduction to a new world or civilisation showed promise to the overall plotline, that was creative. I presume at one point, the Author has no interest to further develop the story because the abrupt ending.
I was very disappointed with the overall. I gave 4 stars for translation was for common grammatical mistakes, especially the usage of "his", "her", "he" & "she". I thank the Translator for taking the time to translate the work until the end. Previously, there was a long period of "no updates" but I'm glad we have the closure needed. I'm just glad that it ended at 500+ chapters.
This book is really great I have tears at times the characters were amazing and the sequence brilliant , I couldnβt get enough and recommend this book .
it got me hooked at first and it's really interesting ngl, but after she resided back in her residence things started to get really really boring. the story stated that she's a genius a 1 in a 10000 (idk anymore but the story described it like this) but it turns out that she only knows how to depend on the snake. the fl is not my type of fl who is independent and grows stronger and stronger. well i can say that this is not my type of tea so bye bye
Really well written and an enjoyable story arc without a messy plot. The story went seamlessly without a ton of side arc mess. The characters developed at a reasonable rate and even when at their "supposed" op state still faced difficulties.
one thing dear author plz don't make space line between the lines it's kinda irritating when we read it make the story somehow boring write it in paragraphs it's become much better then till then I can't read in this pattern π wish u good luck
I completed reading it today.....I really enjoyed it. i am going to miss Zi Shang and Ye jiuye β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
I wish there is second book too.
past one week....I was hook with this book.
thank you dear author for writing this entertaining story.
I love it.
The story is the average girl reborn to in a different world and done quite nicely, its well written with a minimal amount of typing errors and i only got two complaints, not that much world building and that the charecters (mainly the female lead even though she seems to have been written as a genius based on the reaction of people around her) are UNBEARABLY STUPID and lack common sense in most situations, it got to the point where i can't make myself read onwards, i just get frustrated by the stupidity. somewhere around ch 150 if you wonder.
Don't get me wrong, there are some interesting concepts and charecters and its a great read if you can ignore the flaws, but i can't.
Sorry if there are any misstypings. I'm writing this on my phone.
I really don't want to give the novel a low rating since I'm reading it, but if you've read Evil Emperor's Wild Consort and Black Bellied Miss, you would understand that this novel is those 2 novel smashed together and then shortened by at least half of the entirety. I didn't give translations a 5 star because of some of the grammatical errors and also the paragraph errors that kept on appearing on my phone. I don't read novels when they're not completed, so naturally the stability of updates would be 5 stars.
The story development is kind of rushed and details are almost minimal. As soon as an important scene, it quickly gets resolved in the very next chapter. The build up that makes a reader naturally anxious or expectant is not there. The character design is kind of one dimensional. Though, it may probably be because there are so many types of characters that are similar to the MC and ML of this novel out there in other novels already.
World background has the lowest rating because it's just... Sigh... I think the author didn't plan out the world much. I think they gave it some thought and was just trying to spice up the novel or elongate it. The worlds are introduced in a rushed and out-of-nowhere attitude. [img=faceslap]
Alright, although I am not happy about those things, there are other things that are good. Like, the MC and ML's relationship. It's a bit stupid because there's love AT THE VERY BEGINNING, but it's very fluffy and the novel is light. Of course, if I had to give one big warning or something like that, it's that there's no warning earlier on that there is almost ***** scenes.
Most ***** scenes have been produced to not become explicit, but as a young reader, it could still be uncomfortable if the *** scenes come out of nowhere. The author has gone close to the border of smut and not smut, but just sexual distortion. Anyways, enjoy reading this novel despite all this though.
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