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Maurz
MC gets an op absorbing ability, only absorbs like 2 things. Constantly loses until he comes back, loses again, then comes back and plot armor kicks in. Disappointing.
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I_Only_Sleep
A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings
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DireKitsune
Great novel but why are 140 characters needed. ....e.e.djhejsjwksjsjjsjjsksksjsjdjsbshhsshhehehsdhjhdhsjskslaksjjsjjjsjsksksksksksskSksjhdhdhdjdjsjsjsjshsjsjs
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AsuraMing
I like how yes it does seem as though the protagonist is quite overpowered but in actuality hes on a snowball effect to that however at this point in the story it's still not enough to impact to affect the story this is all I want to say for the moment good day
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sdoryfider
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stinkclaw
I'll be honest with you author at first I thought this story was could be pretty good and it was. but then After you give the main character he is magoffin and he is slowly learning from his new Father figure he breaks the only thing keeping alive. an ancient blood diagram and ai. while it makes sense for that to happen so he needs to learn blood inscription as reguardless he would probably need it later. but it just turn me off this story hard. "an ancient and powerful thing that will make you invincible" broken after one revenge fight.
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Yellow_sand24
At first the main character acts stupid and reckless as if he can take on the world but he does end up learning respect and learns to not just self destruct his own body every freakin time he fights. Overall it is a pretty good story. Minimal grammar issues and good plot
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UnholyGrainOfSand
To be completely honest, this book almost exactly describes what it's like to be a sociopath. I know because I am one.
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zeks101
The story line is great although sometimes I get lost in the MC's past.
I also would like to propose that more chapter should be released on time for more lasting reading pleasure
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ca_l
A really good novel in my opinion but from what the author said he got quite a few bad reviews due to MC's actions so I wish to tell those guys yes MC did act on impulse a few times and did stupid things but I would also like to say he is a teenagers barely 12 at the beginning of the story how can you expect him to be perfect and make perfect choices ? Also a cold personnality does not mean he is a genius so stop thinking like that please 😤.
Back on the review, the good point in this novel is the characters' development I mean unlike quite a lot of novels MC learns from his mistakes and change his way of doing things (or at least he tries).
The novel is well written though sometimes it's kinda confusing and there is a few mistakes here and there but nothing too big to understand what's happening.
To conclude I wish you luck Mr or Ms Author 😁
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Chillin_Spirit
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FriedWater
liked it but need more frequent updates. the story was nice in the beginning. loved the starting chapter. and also a lot of other scenarios and how the character developed
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Witcher101
This book has so many flaws. The writing is poor, the updates are erratic, the MC is a stupid arrogant egomaniacal retard who kills everyone even if they just say no to him. The synopsis is right that he is ruthless and that would be okay, but the way he goes about doing stuff ruins the book. Plus there is no romance, even the side characters are liars and stupid.
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duck_alternate44
AUTHOR PLEASE RESPOND BECAUSE I NEED TO KNOW
-Have you dropped the book or it the upload schedule just really slow because I want to binge read it so I wait for more chapters but there are only a very small amount of chapters released each month.
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duck_alternate44
More, need more, more, just more, MoEr, MorE, mOrE
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Rojikku
I've read one chapter, and skipped to the end thus far. I. Both cases, you don't know how to write dialogue correctly - though it's far from the worst I've seen.
Google it.
"It should look something like this," he explains.
" Not like this." He corrects.
Capitalize proper nouns, especially the word I. Spellcheck will literally do the work for you, I don't understand the difficulty. You can get it for free. Libre office? Google? Atom? Anything you want.
Reply when you have a chapter that's done correctly, and I'll update my review accordingly.
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Cookieeeees
I am a real fan of this story.
It has a unique setting and a cool protagonist, who isn't like many others cold-blooded from the start, but has history to back his character up. Additionally it has great emphasis on character development and focus on different types of arts (martial arts, etc.) which are used interesting and in his own ways. The protagonist is not born as "the strongest" or "the genius of this generation" and this had made a real interesting storyline happening. And it is also not a gloomy and only focusing on action type of story which would make it after a while boring, but also sometimes funny and has changing feelings (sometime relaxed, sometimes frustrating, sometimes funny)
However there ARE amazing fights in which the protagonist not always wins.
Overall this is one of my favorite stories on Webnovel and I can highly recommend this. And yes for many at first the protagonist and the story might seem lacking but these are filled in later in the story which is another point I like to add: everything is not shoved right at the beginning but proceeds through the story
So a great thanks for the author for this amazing story (and sorry this is gotten so long 😅)
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Mugen2
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Passer_by
I love the story as well the world background..the characters are also very good..but the stability of updating is not that much high....plz at least give us 4ch / week...
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asya_xdd
Hello again! Why are new chapters come on so rare now?No time or other reason?
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HOLDER
Muy buena
Es de mi tipo
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asya_xdd
Good novel, although i read only 10 chapter. But i have 1 question. Why you don't wrote nothing about level enemy, when he had a fight? After 10 chapter have something about it? If no you need to fix it, i think it's important thing for any good novel.
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