Reviews of RWBY: Reborn With A System by Glace - Webnovel

Well, this novel can't be called bad but it definitely cannot be called good. A bit below average in my opinion. I'm not talking about the quality of plot or character design blah blah blah. No, I'm talking about the fact that the writing is done in stage dialogue. It breaks the immersion and makes you really upset and irritated. Not much can be said about the stability of updates either. I also didn't like the fact that the mc can switch between faunus and human form freely. I'd rather have him as fully human or faunus(in this case, faunus would be better cuz the author wanted to give a bloodline to the mc). This is because while it's cool to switch between human and faunus, it wouldn't work in RWBY and would just make more complications. Also, the descriptions, while good, can be improved. For example; [Ancient Wolf : The first wolf that existed. Stronger than normal wolves but have less control] can be changed to something like [Primordial Wolf: The wolf that has existed from the beginning. They are have powerful abilities and are almost unmatched in their era. However, they tend to have less control over their formidable powers.] See? Don't make it too blunt unless you plan to write a lot of infodumps. I do appreciate the fact that the author filled in the background for new readers who are not familiar with RWBY. It wasn't much effort but rarely do I see authors who actually bothered to do it.

not even gonna lie... love the story but hate that is been over a year since you updated it last... but it seems that you get stuck nd just nice on to another story instead of sticking it out... I'm just sayin that I really like the story nd haven't found another like it...

Would need a rewrite, grammar is very bad as well as how the story develops. Don't get me wrong, the base is very good but every characters seems too childish.

I just finished reading the 10th chapter, it was pretty fucking funny when he saw the wolf chew up his sister in the dream. Although I wish the wolf eat everybody that he cares about, the sister is fine enough for now.

I just come for the EXP!

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its good i like it i hope you dont drop it i would like to see what happens after he runs after yang.

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This fan-fic is one of the BEST fan-fics that I have read so far. I really love the ways that the characters are growing and how the world is being changed be the main character. A really great read!!!

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This is great but the update is messed up now it was alright This is great but the update is messed up now it was alright This is great but the update is messed up now it was alright This is great but the update is messed up now it was alright This is great but the update is messed up now it was alright

why? it's like some child wrote it without any though or clear path on how the story would be as well as the stupidity as well. Why? why is this screaming retarded?!?! This literally makes no sense as well as a complete disregard to The gamer Comic which is a literal insult, and a complete mockery of all other RWBY Gamer Fanfics out there

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I'm liking it very much, hope you can continue to write this, great job.😃😁😃😁😃😁😁😃😁❤😆😂😉🙂🙃😊🙂😊😀😅🙂😊😉🙃😊😃😆😃😊🙂😆😃😆 more chapters please and bye.

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You knew what, just the fact that you have shown just how pathetic Gin, your MC is makes the story worth taking 5 stars. I mean this story just shows that no matter how great the advantage one gets, no matter the opportunity, the outcome will always be a pathetic person with no real results. This is what happens when you coddle someone to much and don't let them walk on their own two feet. Anyways, keep it up I just love seeing how pathetic Gin is! 5 start from me!

Hello! I absolutely love this novel! The characters are great, the story is awesome! Altogether, this is a great find. For RWBY fans, I highly recommend this novel, it won't disappoint! Even if your not a RWBY fan, this story is a great way to pass the time. Once again, I love this novel and can't wait to see what happens. Thank you for writing this novel and keep up the great work! XD

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I'm trying to find a good story here that has decent romance but literally everyone and their mother on the internet writes about harems and it honestly pisses me off slightly. You don't need a harem to add characters in and you don't always have to have a MC that bangs every female.

I really like this book but when u have the Grimm take over everything and they control him it gets bad jkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkjjjkkjjjjjjjjjj

one of my favorite things about it so far is that you give enough knowledge at the first couple chapters so that people who don’t watch RWBY can still read and know about the world

My god I love the concept. Wish for more chapters a week, as it’s insanely slow waiting for them. Also I despise the whole harem thing. If it wasn’t for that, I’d literally spend money on this novel.

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