This is the best book I have read on any online platform, both in terms of writing quality and story and character development. If the author finishes it, I think it could make it into print publishing.
Since the tags don't really show much about this story, I will state it here. This story is an Isekai novel with gaming concepts, and somewhat of a system. Just the author avoids stating any of these. There is also an overpowered main character.
Such a great book.. it's so hard to find a book like this.. it does have a slow start but gets better after every chapter.. you should definitely give it a shot..
A well crafted story with a strong female MC. A good blend of fantasy and sci-fi elements. The author takes some time to set the main action in motion but the world building is well constructed.
FINALLY!! I am so happy to have found your story and gotten the chance to read it. On behalf of the female community, may I say, YOU ROCK!! Having browsed through the endless repulsive and cringy garbage with concubines and CEOs, your story is a ray of sunshine in the darkness....I absolutely love your work and your ideas, that you have implemented into your story. I hope that your story gets more exposure in the future as you totally deserve to stand at the top in this genre, compared to the rest of the cheap and feudal garbage.
Now unto my review as of chapter 17:
I think a 1st person POV narrative would reduce the dullness and stiffness of the story and help the reader to immerse better into the story as well as build a connection to the MC. The MC seems overly passive and completely dull in this sense. It might really help the reader to sympathize with the MC. It is just a suggestion and my personal opinion, no offense. So far, this is my only complain about this gem, really.
Please keep up the good work!! I hope we will see even more of your work in the future. May you get the spotlight you deserve.
Cheers,
Mina
The start is slow, then it picks up at a reasonable pace, nobles are doosh-mongers, she builds, makes friends, and kicks butt. Sad that the author has been quiet for three months as of this review.
Beautiful mix of sci-fi and fantasy! The main character Zoey is a wonderful character that has been through so much but still stays strong. She has amazing powers, and I applaud the author for coming up with a great concept. Viridi is the best girl and deserves more love. Athena is a wonderful friend and she is strong too! Overall a great story and I hope to get more content since itβs been about 2 months
Interesting characters and intriguing worlds. The author adds his own comments to the end of nearly every chapter giving insight to the development. Solid read.
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Very good story so far with an very interesting MC. I like the op female mains the most. Thanks for writing this. The only issues was that I found myself skipping a lot og the filler chapters that had no connection to the actions of the MC.
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