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Calistal
[ New, confused, unsatisfied, dropping, upset reader information ] I didn't want to write a review at all, because making a review of my own story would be too biased and I'd rather leave it for the readers to make reviews, because you can't be your best judge, as you'll be too biased about yourself or something you made. But this isn't a review of the story, just information for new readers that are thinking about dropping the story because of the characters choices. But since I feel that something needs to be addressed, so having this posted here would be the better option since some people won't make it to Plot development + Character development & genres chapter to get full clarification for the plans and explanations of the story and characters. If anyone at all, is having irritation or problems with the MC, Ivery's character before chapter 19 where her character development starts then at least try to read the story to chapter 30, just to get a feel of how the whole story will be from then on. Ivery's character will continue to make changes until the very end, as well as the ML, Luther's character. I know and I can understand if anyone is frustrated with how Ivery responds and deals with her situations in the early chapters and there's a good reason why there's no immediate revenge. Most problems are addressed and explained in chapter 30 and even further than that as the story progresses. I'm writing this only because some people are dropping the story in early chapters for things that are already changed and meets their expectations of her character and in later chapters and even future chapters. Most problems will be resolved for you only if you read, that's all it takes, to read it through to chapter 30 if you can. Ivery's character was never going to stay naive, gullible, shallow, weak minded, irresponsible, and stupid as people have perceived her so far. And it was never in my plans to make her that way, that's just how she comes off. She's still a teenager in both lives so at some points she can be seen as immature or just plain stupid, as she gets older in the story and learns from her experiences, she will mature, all you have to do is give her time. This was always my plan for her. Her being the way she is at the start and how she will be at the end, will be proof of her development. The problem is some people aren't giving her a chance to even start to develop and drop the story at chapters 1-6, when there's other chapters that will hopefully resolve the problems they have with her. Ivery and Luther's relationship will definitely be misunderstood if you don't read, but it's already fully clarified in the story where their relationship is if you read on, all it takes to understand the story and it's characters is if it is read to certain chapters that explain it all. So I thank all of the readers that will consider this request of mine, and I thank all of the readers that are still with the story at the latest chapters.
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Glilly
Let me just say, love the story, love the characters, the drama, the horror and gore, the OPness, and the romance between the ML and MC. I started reading this story months ago and at the time there wasn’t many chapters to get a feel of the story but now that I’m catching back up with it, I’m blown away with all of the plot twists and there were so many things I didn’t think would happen but it did. I’ve seen that people have been having problems with Ivery ( MC ), and I don’t get why, people are expecting her to be instantly OP and over matured from the start of the story when she literally doesn’t know what her powers are or what she can do and people also have a problem with her constantly asking Loki what to do, when that’s what he’s supposed to do, help her, answer her questions, she doesn’t know her powers and he does, he’s also there to teach her what her powers are and how she can use them, simple as that. I’d understand dropping the story if 1-80 chapters into a story, and the characters make no changes or simply gets worst, but people are dropping this story at chapters 1-5 because of the characters, which have and are already making changes in other chapters, most importantly, Ivery. Some people aren’t remembering that Ivery (MC) is still a teenager with a sad background if you made it to chapter 9. She still needs to mature as the author said, but some people don’t care about that because she’s supposed to know what to say and do automatically after being transported into another world, and having only the knowledge she had in her original life, the new world she’s in is totally different with different laws and different people, the normal in the world she’s in isn’t the same normal in the world she was used to. Some people don’t realize that she doesn’t know how to use her powers after she’s suddenly told she’s has magic and has no experience using magic, but because of that it makes her useless and weak because she didn’t learn how to use them? And some people are complaining that she’s always asking Loki what do to next, umm, maybe because he’s her magical GUIDE and she doesn’t know her powers and the world she’s and Loki does. MC is interested in a boy (ML) Luther, shes interested in him only because he has a handsome face and will do anything he asks her just because he’s handsome? Author even said, even if Luther had average looks, everything still would’ve happened the same way. She’s interested in him out of curiosity because she’s obviously never been in a romantic relationship before because of how her life was before I find it hard to believe she had time or the mental strength to be in a relationship, so things like that are foreign to her. She doesn’t get immediate revenge on the Emperor and Empress, so she’s stupid for that? Maybe it’s because if she went after the Emperor and Empress, it would’ve caused more problems than good, and keep in mind Ivery is still learning her powers, she didn’t learn any of her offensive powers yet when she encountered the Emperor so how was she supposed to kill him and the Empress, he obviously overpowered her when they first met. So what if ML kills other people that anger him or kills people that upset or target the MC. As long as he’s gentle and nice and continues to save and protect our MC that’s all that matters to me.
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SethJems
I highlyhighly recommend this novel, am still reading this but I find it enjoyable and interesting. if you like bloody, historical and romance this novel iS for you.
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Whats_Happening101
The story is great, loved is so much I read it twice, I really like how powerful our main characters were and how the story wasn’t boring even though our main characters were somewhat over powered but when will it update?😿🙏
1yr
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Ewurafua_Ampong
wish they continue posting more chapters just can't wait.very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood story line.one of the best books I have read.hope the writer continues.😆😆
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Twinkle_124
Since, I'm obsessed with horrer, It was great story for me .... Author did a great job and I quite like story line... Ivery is such a lovely girl...
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Pasiphae
I love this story a lot! I was just going to read the Remarried Empress, but this book caught my attention. The title and the synopsis got me interested and I was very pleased after reading a few chapters!
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A_Stranger_1012
Great story, Great writing from the author and a beautiful, story with gore written within in. The author did a great job developing the story. Love it
3yr
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v_eela
It is honestly one of the best books on this platform. The romance is one of my favorite parts of this book I really recommend it to those who love fantasy and strong capable leads.
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Sage_Fire
The World In this Story Is Unbalanced, I have read Upto 6 chapters and Already, There Are mentions That only 2 Infinite Abilities exist. If Only 2 Exist? Who Will Fight them? Who is The Antagonist? What is The Purpose? THE FATE was Changed The moment She had Her Powers Unlocked, If That Loki Was Keeping her powers under Control, Then She Should have Better Off Exploded In my opinion. This Novel Can Only Be read By Horny Teenagers And Not Suited For a Mature person. Kisses are fine, Blood is Fine, Even Gore is Fine. But In my opinion, The Main Characters Should Rot in Hell In The Furnace. If they Don't Suffer Any consequences of their Actions then Their Gods Should be Erased By a Higher God/Entity. They Concentrated All their Creation On Those two, That It's Too Unbalanced Of a Story for my Tastes. If This Female Lead Fears Opinion of Others then She is Never Worthy of the Infinite. Character Designs 1/5 World Background 1/5 Story Development 2/5 Updating Stability 3/5 Writing Quality 4/5(I admit It's Not Horrible In Grammar or Any Of that Thing) This Story Is Not For Me, I can accept Evil, Only if there is A reason To it, I hate And Loathe Unreasonable Characters, And My Patience has already ran thin.
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guyzbwarned891
When I first started this story I wasn't sure what to expect, but as I have continued reading I have really enjoyed it. The author did a great job creating the worlds, adventures, and storyline. I can't wait until more chapters are released
3yr
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PandaMagic_27
This is an amazing story. Ivery and Luther make such a good couple, it's so cute! I also love that Ivery has a strong character. I don't know how to explain this amazing story! I hope there are more chapters! One of the best, I mean the best story I have ever read!! Keep making more!!
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Owlseyes4242
This book is like one in a million I've never seen a book which blended gore romance fantasy and is such a perfect thriller u can't stop at one chapter you'll always want to know what's coming next
3yr
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Sulizamy
very excited story,thank you author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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no matter the size and age they need it is that you have the ability and respect that the company will have the best of you to achieve with a successful career
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Loving it! 💖 ...........................................................................................................................................................................
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TanniaJay
I got so confused when writing this review hahaha lbut so Far so good i like the atory the adventure i feel like Everychaoter could be a whole episode if made into an anime!! Keep up the great work !!
3yr
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SoraWinter
I love this story, it my second time read this book. I hope author sama will keep writing awesome story. 😁 😁 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻 👍🏻
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Daoist849510
Author i wad wondering, since IK some time in the future we will be required to use fast passes or coins. I was wondering if you had a exact date for that. Its just i love this book so much, and I don't want to be disappointed on day when i go to read a new CHP and it is locked lol.
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Dobrozlo
Good......,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,..,,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,,.
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Daoist849510
This novel is one of the many i have read that are isekai, but this novel for some reason feels different and it keeps pulling me in and making me thirst for more lol lve the story cant wait for next chp.
3yr
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Digressia_Raven
This book really is incredible 😍 I love the story and the way it can make me feel so many emotions I love my fl coz I am seeing her grow into a powerful person besides our handsome male lead Luther
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danadidy
Love it! The characters have substance and that's what keeps me interested in them. The stories are always changing adding up to the suspense. Overall I don't find the story to grotesque as the author always portraits it to be at the beging of each chapter, maybe because I've seen my fair share of horror films and stories so I find it alright. Don't know what people keep complaining about. Keep up the work! ❤️
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Leyeh2girl
Dear author, thank you for creating a nice story like this. Please don't give up and continue to give us more interesting story ♥️♥️♥️
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EmpressAurora
I like the old cover more...
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Flump1
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Great book.
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puoneer_132
If I could get this book in a hard copy it would have bin a lot better but this book was the best one so far that I have read this year the design of the character in the world that it is in was the best that I have read.
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