Reviews of Immaculate Spirit by Newbiel - Webnovel

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4.67

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KnightShade420
Bro the title of your story and the synopsis didn't do your story justice. I will be honest I was not very excited about reading a story about a kid sharing head space with a CIA Agent. I didn't know where you were going with this nor the fact that you would combine the two souls together to make a better whole. If I knew your story was anything like Jay Aslan I would have been more excited about reading it. I am ecstatic that I took a chance with your story and kind of angry that you didn't make you synopsis better lol. I could have missed a gem because of that. That all said thank you for a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.
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DMighty_Cultivator
Okay someone help me out. I did a break at were he broke up with the girl in college but I don’t remember which chapter is that and I don’t wanna start over again, so can you tell me which chapter is it ? Thank you!
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Madeycade_Cade
We ’re can I find more chapters plz 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Christine_C_Mason
This novel is the best and would be great as a movie adaptation... IMHO...anyways it's not completed and I have read all 246 chapters and I hope it didn't get dropped....but I think it did or the author isn't on Webnovel anymore *long sigh* It really sucks when a diamond like this novel gets buried.
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Sarah_D_0807
I love the whole thing the back ground anf the world is well done. The story itself is amazing as well and I love the animals in it lol. Please keep up the good work
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Blaz3r
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The Story is good and everything but if it was a bit more realistic would've been 5/5 i mean come on, a teenager talking about killing someone? ordering his family members around, etc *Sigh* and i was looking around for this kind of novel but i dropped it and now it's been 2 days looking for something similar all of them are chinese/ bad english which i drop at chapter 1~3
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wanttoget_rich
gosh?! this is gold. why didn't i read this sooner cause this was in my library for at least 3 months. so glad i read this, in the first place i wasn't really attracted to the title and the cover just added it to my library cause i wanted some mystery and detective kind of novel but didn't expect it to be this good
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lemonburger
This is one of the best novels, I have read. The plot and characters are just amazing. It is a real gem. I just hope that the novel will get more updates in the futur. Thank you author for this novel 😄
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SMatheson
I picked this by chance to read about it and when i started reading it i realized i really enjoyed this. Though still i am only on chapter 47 I am excited to continue this till the end. This is not something I usually read and so far I recommend it
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jstinn
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jstinn

i absolutly love this novel!!!! one of my all time favorite mc, great story, great interactions with other characters and really interesting side characters! I need more chapters ASAP
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Grandelf
This is one of the best novels I’ve read until now there is some grammatical mistakes but other than that the Story is just amazing the world building i like the cold side of the mc and the rules that he follows in his liFe im honestly impressed. i’m waiting for next chapters and if tou guys know any novel like this can You please recommend it to me. ❤️❤️
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Haroon_Patel
Like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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moped1244
great story: world building incorporates modern reality and supernatural perfectly. MC is intristing, determind, ruthless and funny and the story has intristing plot. if not for the rare realease rate it would be my favorite novel keep up the good work
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MisterImmortal
A very enjoyable book. Now only if the updates were regular. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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DaoistK4HIZC
when is the next chapter jhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Tyrannicalsaber
I love this novel!! The story itself is stable and the world building also. The content is unique. Its the life of the mc, adventures but also full of humour. All in all its great and I hope more people read this novel. I only hope that there are more updates but I'm also grateful that there is at least one update a month and it's not dropped
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Arxellll
DUDE YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST INTERESTING AUTHOR THAT HAVE A BEST BOOK.. AND THE TITLE DOESN'T GIVE JUSTICE TO YOUR STORY... YOUR STORYLINE IS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE
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VSilver
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Realmente um bom romance, com uma história diferente do habitual, mas envolvente e Boa de se ler, ótimos personagens(tirando algumas kkkk), enfim o romance trás uma cara nova o que nos trás curiosidade e vontade para continuar imerso em seu universo, porém com uma pequena taxa de lançamento(bem pequena), oque faz perceber um leve desinteresse do autor(opinião pessoal), trazendo dúvida ao seu futuro, talvez um hiato, sinceramente espero que continue tem uma ótima história é com incentivo e lançamentos suficiente, será uma grande obra, mesmo uma possível leitura paga seria justificável com lançamento constante, afinal ninguém gostaria de ficar sem um final...[img=coins][img=coins]
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Nain_

Other than the common but small grammar mistakes, I like the story. ...........................................
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LordKRaw
I enjoy reading this novel. It has just the right amount of ass-kicking. Which makes it my new favorite. Keep up the good work.😁❤🥰👏👏👍👍
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Jack_Priper
1+2+3+3+3/5=2.4 Dunno if it is because this feels more familiar than some of the others out there. Usually, if I read a book where the editing sucks balls (not quite big time), I drop it pretty quickly. I kept reading this and it's quite the fun read. I would complain that the release rate is extremely slow but maybe that is one of the reasons why the content is reasonably good.
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ProfessorofCulture
it is really good, if not for that pinned review I might not have read this. the major problem it has is the grammar. I encourage others not to be discouraged by the synopsis
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Umar_Shafiu
Everything about this novel just makes me want to read more. Remind me of the series Scandal. I love it the more I read. ............................
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kaiser4085
Best of all the modern fantasy story. it was so addictive that i completed 234 chapters i one go and now I'm waiting for new chapters.i found this novel accedently and got hooked into it.The way author develops the characters and environment it is too good. i recommend this novel to all the readers out there. Author thank you for the masterpiece.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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