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Veronica8
Pretty cool story with some realism added to cultivation. This story isn't so much about leveling up, rather something of a discovery journey at this stage. I'm not really clear on the story's purpose or stakes, but this is a slow burner that gradually reveals as it goes. It's all good. The key characters are nicely written. Aside from grammar slips, the storytelling is easy with a good reading flow. I didn't have to back track.
Looking forward to seeing how the story continues to unfold.
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Asphant
Incredible.
That was one of the most well-written original stories I have read. The pacing was good. The opening was absolutely immersing, I have to take you up on that.
The character design was also great, really liked Yun Da Xia's personality, as well as her master.
There aren't anything to hate here since it has only 11 chapters and the characters, world background, plots and etcetera are not developed enough.
Except for an extremely few number of grammar mistakes, everything about this book is perfect.
Exceptional work. Definitely adding this to my library.
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Chryiss
Writing, Updates, World: 5
Story, Character: 4
Although the story is slowly building up to something big, it hasn't yet reached that gripping point which really hooks readers at least plot-wise. This has many of the same events familiar to transmigration stories, but what makes this stand out is its writing of it. Beautiful writing with good detail, vocabulary, and description. It's not any plain, old, typical webnovel quality, but stylistic writing of the Author's.
MC's are hard to make well, and I have a good impression of this one. The FL isn't weak nor arrogant/brash. The Prince, while short on his encounter, also doesn't come off as completely annoying or power hungry. The rest of the characters have yet to make a substantial impact or come across distinctively, but this is only the beginning, and I think we will have that very soon.
This story is still building its foundations, and it has done it very well. At this point, the most enjoyable point would be the writing which immerses one into the world and story. But I imagine soon, the plot and character development also will really shine. Great work!
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MyCharacterLeads
First of all, thumb's up for pulling this kind of story.đ
I will make this short..
â Cultivation
â transmigration
â Genius MC
â MC's supportive family
I leave a small gap of the rating for this novel needs a little polishing..
Keep it up..!đ
Fighting..
PS: valid till chapter 11
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Sapphirechelsea237
Your story is great! I like the stories of this genre very much!!! And the reverse harem is something which every female lead should have! ;)
Though I feel there is a lack of some details but overall this story is fun to read!
Keep writing author and give us more updates! :D
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tsuragakyoko
Love the story,but I really hope author will update next chapter more taste like other novel,and hope this novel get more rate like the other novel...really,if the chapter update faster,I think more and more people like to read it..
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mooji
[Isekai is a common genre wherein the MC is transported to another world.]
âStability of Updatesâ is a more statistical rating. Also, considering how the Author currently has 3 unfinished novels, it's understandable how she has a irregular update schedule. But here's to hoping for a more fixed schedule and regular updates.
âWriting Qualityâ seems to be missing the opportunity provided by allegorical references. Seeing recognizable references to the real world is often the best way to help the audience familiarize and understand the overall situation of the MC and it helps create a closer bond between the characters and the audience.
âStory Developmentâ is on the ârelatively quickâ pace. Leaving a few questions burning that shouldâve been answered immediately. In my opinion, if anything huge happens to the story, like the MC being transported to another world, the Author needs to focus more on painting the new picture clearly; giving each and every detail previously mentioned a time to stand in the spotlight.
âCharacter Designâ and âWorld Backgroundâ work hand-in-hand in Isekai. A common overused formula in Isekai, which is still sometimes interesting if done right, is to âMake the MC define the World as a way of giving them a small nudge to success even though theyâre already so OP.â *Ahem* âReincarnated as a Slimeâ *Ahem* But, as proven by the Isekai anime âRising of the Shield Hero,â making the MC follow the Worldâs rules is a realistic approach to being transported in another world and is much more interesting to follow-- which seems to be the formula the Author is currently using. However, in a way of advising the author as well, following this pattern is not the yellow brick road to success. Focusing too much on one component, World or the Character, makes things predictable.
As a incredibly huge fan of the Isekai genre, also keeping in mind that this is the Authorâs first book delving in the fiery hailstorm that is Isekai,
âPeerlessâ is incredibly well-made and is interesting to follow, I am honestly looking forward to what happens to the MC and how she reacts to the obstacles, the World, in her path to glory (and romance).
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