Reviews of The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I) by Jelim - Webnovel

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Sand_Whale
It is a story that combines a lot of fantasy elements and the best thing, it’s something new! The world, the characters, the story, the developments they are all very unique and I am really excited to read more of it! A negative aspect for me was the pace in the second volume. The first was breathtaking and violent, you really felt the emotions of the characters. The second was all in all very good, but in comparison it just lacked something. Well I did give 5stars because this novel deserves it and I highly recommend it to everyone who likes fantasy.
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im_uncomfortable
First of all, the writing quality is superb! The setting is interesting and the world building is done quite well. I love the characters although the protagonist becomes overpowered (which is to be expected) I really enjoy reading this story and have binged through all the chapters which have come out so far. The story progresses slowly at some points but it’s still an enjoyable read. I really recommend it!
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SilverPoseidon111
This work is AMAZING. Considering the fact that vampire webnovels are a pretty niched category this author has done a phenomenal job. I’d say they’ve even set a bar for the genre. Most vampire webnovels are either romances, executed incorrectly, or dropped. This one is perfect. I love that there are more than 300+ chapters, rich lore and worldbuilding, and spectacular character development. Plus the author depicts vampires as they should be done, as actual monsters. Teeth, blood, claws and all. This work is really an unsung classic.
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DOWNUT_LORD
love your book, but your not taking it seriously.
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Shadow_Tempest_0
One of the very best novels I've read in my life. From the flawless grammar to the story and characters it's just perfect. Am I tripping or is there only 4 chapters now ? What happened
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DameSage
Just found this gem recently. It is one I highly recommend reading. I wish all the best to the author’s future work and hope they find success in their endeavour to publish.
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Hisana_Candy
This is probably my favourite Webnovel ever. The word-building is amazing—it really feels like the world exists outside of the characters. I know what is possible and impossible within the confines of the world as well. The characters are really well written as well. I understand every character’s motivations and fears and no one does anything outside of character. Sometimes the story tends to focus on certain characters that aren’t as important as the main ones, which can either be good or bad at times. One plus is that it definitely adds to the world-building and it helps us know what everyone is thinking. A minus though is that it sometimes drags on. That being said, it’s because of some of this seemingly unnecessary focus that made me really love Aegin.
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Leaf_Flight
This is an absolutely amazing novel. I get feeling this author is a fan Garron Whited like though. Anyways, great characters, great atmosphere, great world building. There was a part in the middle after part 2 ended where I skimmed through some chapters because the cliffhanger was just so intense and it suddenly switched from mostly third-person limited to third-person omniscient. Regardless, this is one of the best light novels I’ve ever read. I hope there is more.
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Black_Rose_19
A true diamond in the rough, the story really had me invested. I really enjoyed the business Rassa had created, most stories would end with the characters facing off with a final boss so the business was unexpected and extremely entertaining. Overall A+ writing.
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Carmine_Maurone
One of the best reads so far, hope it gets finished on webnovel.
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cerberus4452
I am having a hard time finding the discord lol the invitation code is there but can't find the place to put it............................................
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Sweetiewwee
Whyyyy whyyy are you ending whyyy this booK is too great end Too awesome to end pls pls pls pls Dont ENd im a big fan oF this book
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Gangshizzle
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Sweetiewwee
This book is absolutely amazing I love the details I love everything about it I love how the characters and how the main character is and how he is functioning and getting past what he suffered when he was a child I love everything about this and I hope you keep updating and keep developing your story more and more and this book needs more recommendations because it’s Great
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Lonewolf256
Author Just keeps surprising Me with the Way He keeps pulling out more storylines Where I Was thinking It would end Been with the book right from the onstart, will Be till the end. Thanks for the Book Author Jelim ✌
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cerberus4452
one of the best novel on do not drop it is so different than the other ones. [img=update] exp exp exp exp exp................................
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CriticalReader
Worst attempt at writing character development... nothing but angst and drama... mc never changes... still naive, stupid,delusional and cowardly Mc is a pushover worse than light novel mcs... after being imprisoned, tortured, humiliated, betrayed, experimented on... his still the same... I'd like to know how ? Eventually I realized after 140 chapters... author is obsessed with writing an emo character(like arifureta mc)... he has no idea what he wants to be...whether a monster or a antihero There is no plot, just drama and slice of life. Imagine a character that is so unrealistic but author pretends that humans... don't get trauma and all you need is friends... really ? 140 chapters... i think I've given the novel a fair chance because of the potential of the premise... sadly all it takes is an mc who makes you wonder whether he is a masochist... to ruin any enjoyment in reading the novel My two cents... if you like mcs like shinji... you'll enjoy this otherwise... you might post your own rant soon after
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Bank_Zimmerman
A really great book not getting the type of attention it should have considering how the vampire novel in webnovel are written great overall worldview and character building. I’m thrilled
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cerberus4452
This is one of the best novels on here. Please read this novel if you like a good story. exp hrududjf8dudiciiwufofhe8ueidufie8eu8furie8due8fhfu7f3ihfoeieyu
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MaDnEsS
Was the best story until the protagonist died.... ................................................. ........................ .............
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MiaMiaMia
Actually impossible to put down once you start reading it. The writing is excellent and the world building it's done is fantastic. The characters and plot are unique and it doesn't follow many of the frustrating tropes youd find in a novel with vampires. Absolutely a must read novel, especially if you like vampires or high fantasy.
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May_Song
This story is an absolute masterpiece! I dont get how it isnt as popular as it should be! The grammar and Flow of every sentence is amazing and the storyline and character development is absolutely pleasing to read!!
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cerberus4452
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cerberus4452
I like when auther's of books talks to their readers. Like when your droping a book or making more chapters and more so please don't drop this books.
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cerberus4452
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cerberus4452
8 days and no chapter........................... ..........................................................................................................................................
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cerberus4452
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Isekai_Truck_kun
Hello, before reading this, can I ask if the is any romance?
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cerberus4452
need more then one chatper per week. :D ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Davidep
Great novel ,concentrated on world building and story telling ,very fluid ,but there is a clear hostility toward combact encounters ,they are few and short and allaways and with something bad happening , the author doesn't seem to like them ,which is a shame cince even if short they are all quite epic ,their end is always kind harsh ,which stops you from enjoying them
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Lewis_Lannagan
so I've read this from start to finish and put simply... its bloody amazing. from the troubled characters to the world ,all of it is interesting. though the characters have to take the prize. every character feels real with there own goals and motives and I need to emphasize this THE MC DOES NOT GET FREE PASSES! think we all hate when the MC gets away with everything while learning nothing and becoming a stagnant character well in this that doesn't happen. so give this novel a chance. also incase you find yourself Hating the MC for his naivety at the start keep in mind it's a story about him going from a naive child to absolute Chad of a man
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zyriel
How can he be the first vampire if there were other vampires before him.... he shouldve been called the last vampire
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