For someone who didn't know monsters existed, he was as calm as can be and that in itself is suspicious to a police officer but somehow their ears are worse than a half deaf person
It would also be good if you make not so strong from the beginning, I mean he will be strong in the future but try not to make him have blind judgment and be super arrogant. Though it’s still good to have some pride as a Vampire God, but yeah try to not make him to strong from the very beginning.
Thanks for the chapter, though it’s a bit short (not that I can say anything), it’s still good, I think you can take 2 to 3 parts with trying to explain more in detail about the world and what is different and set his current strength in the world.
Slytheri