I haven’t read it yet but any Fellow Goblin writer will receive an automatic 5 Stars from me :3 we need more GOBLINS!!! I hope it’s a fun read 👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👽👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👽👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👽👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👽👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👽👾👾👾👾👾
Im going.to add it to my library for now so far it's good a bit silly at time but it adds to the story........................................................
Interesting one. Worth reading. I like it. I love fantasy and like the plot so far; who wouldn't love reincarnated goblin. worth reading. great work author.
Leaving you a review! To be honest, I'm still reviewing many of the parts of your story, and hope you continue to improve as i read through more of it! However, I think it has a strong foundation, and perhaps more dialog would help improve the story?
One recommendation, try and use stronger adjectives and shorter sentences when writing your chapters.
That awkward moment when you give yourself your first review hoping to coerce someone else to follow your lead so your novel won't be buried under ever increasing pile of new novels
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