I'll just keep on selfplugging and give myself a perfect score.
The writing shouldn't be of any concern, and at a completion after one chapter it's by definition stable.
The story comes with a clear beginning, middle and an end. After all, it's completed.
Are the characters worth five stars? I hope so. A short story doesn't give you a lot of leeway, but I've tried to depict different personalities within the liimted scope.
The setting is my home-town. I know it by heart, and eventual readers should recognise it from what's in here. I feel fairly confident in the world background departement.
Oh, and I wanted the EXP for a review as well.
StenDuring