This type of writing style is quite surprising, I have never read such an agressive writing style and I must say, the express of emotions is quite good. Plot seems to be quite fun, but it'll ultimately depend on how the story goes in the end. Might chase my rating depending on how the story flow. But I'll say it's quite a good start.
The story is still starting so I might change the rating later on. But so far, I think it's good...? Maybe? I mean, it's just starting, and it's only two chapters on but then again, I might be wrong. Looking forward to more work, though.
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