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Delther
tell me tou also thought that authors notes in the synopsis were systems notifs
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Adolf_Thiccler1
Itβs really good just needs more chapters but there is more **** going around the world so itβs fine.
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WinnieLePooh
Only problem is the editing in the later chapters it's atrocious. And the way some of the chapters are set out it makes my eyes want to bleed cause it is so bad.
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Endaread
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uNoRiGiNaL
I still cannot understand how a retard could overpower the mind of one of the most intelligent person on earth π€·π€·π€·π€· I mean he was proclaimed as a I unsalvageable retard trash But I dunno stopped at early chapter 2
Pretty good grammar though but bye and good luck
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Endaread
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Shadizar
A fair story overall, although takes some work getting around some of the story development issues early on. Also could use better proofing on the grammar, but the main character's efforts to introduce a variety of more modern technologies and concepts (for a world so primitive it's not even reached the iron age yet) is what really appeals to me.
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PinnacleExistence
It's a great story, but author seems he abandoned it.. but definitely should read. After the initial phase, it's like the start of a engine. Everything happens in a steady and fast way, it's exciting to read it.
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Madness_in_despair
The character at heart is self centered at first but slowly becomes more selfless and more protective of people arouns him. He strives for greatness and a place for tge people that follow him. The writer makes grammar mistakes every so often but that doesn't distract from the storyline.
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ikeaky_sarphy
This story is about interesting to me.πππππππππ. I hope this story will not be dropped later. π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
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aswalzz
It is pretty interesting story, but author mess it up. Turning point in this story is when mc leave the village. .. Sometimes i cannot understand what author write. . Sometimes i confused by the plot. . N then championship whatever pop up. . This story already has good world setting, op system and good starting. . But i think mc character , hmmm i dont know how to describe it. . So in conclusion i dont strongly recommend it for u all to read. . But maybe for killing time, perhaps. .
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KIK0K
Action,Β Adventure,Β Comedy,Β Drama,Β Fantasy, Supernatural
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Aburama
chapter 25 felt totally forced and the grammar is degrading more and more every chapter this went from an interesting story with promise into a confusing mess of poorly-written English and forced circumstances, that being said I'm still going to read it in the hopes that it improves as I'm genuinely interested in the story but im not too optimistic about it.
Writing Quality - 3 stars because I can at least understand what's going on
Stability of Updates - 3 stars Because I havent caught up so im unaware of how consistent the updates are
Story Development - 2 stars as of chapter 25, it's starting to go downhill as the previous 24 chapters of the story became basically pointless, as some characters namely Roger felt like you built up his relationship with the mc for seemingly no reason as you killed him off out of nowhere without reason other than just killing him because you could
Character Design - 2.5 but ill give it a 3 since I can't put that as a star rating, the character went from a seemingly smart mc and turned into an idiot for the most part at first you had the excuse of him not fully unlocking his memories but hes already unlocked most of them yet he does stupid **** and doesn't think of uses he could get out of the systems features even a dumbass like myself thought of ALSO stop replacing the mc's name with "boy" its irritating
World Background - 4 stars for being interesting, so far all we know is he lives in a village after being abandoned by his father with there being another village thats a 4 hour run away from the one he is residing in and that there are kingdoms, empires and noble clans scattered throughout the unknown continent with mysterious beasts and powers held by the previously mentioned factions
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NightmareGodSlayer
I love this novel screw your character limit π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π
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Little_Herb
Bretty goo should read ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye was goo read
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The_Hero_Of_Old
I think this is a great novel because it's different from the other game/reincarnation novels. It also has I creat Mc that might be overpowered but still has neutral karma and not a goody two shoes.
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Niko91
It was ok but after chapter 29-30 the author fucks up, it seams death has no meaning to the mc.
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EveningSong
This novel had potential. So much potential.
HAD. Past tense.
Before chapter 30 the author was weaving a rather good weak to strong novel with a not-dumb and non-stereotypical MC. Things made sense and our MC was getting stronger at a constant rate via hard work
Again, all past tense.
Then, for some reason which I am unable to fathom, around chapter 30 the author forces things into the most stereotypical revenge setting possible. We have random power ups for no reason, the destruction of the environment the MC is trying to improve for no believable reason, and the MC himself starts making stupid decisions.
We have a genre change from slice of life / weak to strong to revenge fantasy / power fantasy. It reads as something incredibly forced and out of character.
On top of all that there is the problem of gradually worsening grammar as the story evolves. Each new chapter is a little less polished then the one before it.
I dropped the novel and cannot recommend that anyone reads this.
To the author: I enjoyed the first 30 chapters or so friend. I would love to read one of your stories which continues in that same vein.
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Dragonfire16
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