Chapter comments on the chapter The Scarlet Dragon Mountain Training of the book The Great Journey With a System

I'm disturbed at how easily he just told her everything.

The story is no fun anymore if you told her about the system and his secret, instead you should make Ray say about the secret of Jasmine, that would be interesting. The author truly has no crafty and creativity ideas.

Ugh....you just left the ancestral God to fucking Yun che and go after a fucking star God like a retard divulging your own origins whereas she just make you a slave without telling her secrets.... I think whether are you sane or what,,?? Even in original Yun che kept his secrets about his previous life and here we have an idiot trying to impress while his birth secrets and interaction...

Soo still became a servant huh

Come on how can you tell her about the system... Thats bull**** move there... Now here I say yun che is much smarter than our MC here.

Little fairy is coming... I always get sad whenever i remember that Eggy(best waifu ever) does not exist in the ATG universe...

Stupid man, stupid man, harem stupid..system OP, mc stupid.. Fu.k

What in the world did i just read??? The first worst fanfic i've ever read in 2020, i'm out

Definitely one of the most retarted storys I have ever read.

Sigh exposing the system was so dumb... I can’t continue

Sigh this chapter has bin a huge disappointment am I am betting he is going to do the same thing with every girl he meets

The **** is that what kind of power she had that can help the mc better than the system that he had a reason to tell her his secret this make no sense...

Ok f*cking bullsh*t this is retarded, yep im out.

Conclusion , HAREM RAISE YOUR STUPIDITY LEVEL TO THE MAX

Stupidest main character I have ever seen

Btw you can check out my novel : Strongest Unlimited Unknown Supreme Being,

i see that no one mentioned this so i'll say it.YOU CAN'T RETCON THE GOD SLAYING POISON AND SKY POISON PEARL WITH A FUCKING GIGAI!! i ain't gonna judge you for putting your own spin on things to suit your fancy but it's called world building for a reason. the god slaying poison is the strongest poison in the known universe and ONLY the sky poison pearl can cure it. one reason jassmine can't get out of the pearl is because she can't survive outside of it. being a spirit doesn't stop her from going outside, it's the poison that does. heck, she even took corporal form for a few days after she got cured but even one step outside the pearl negates months of progress in removing the poison. the gigai doesn't have any healing abilities, so she will literally ROT in it.

Well other than the blood she does absolutely nothing

Officially dropped, never read such a bull****tiing story 🙄seriously disappointed.

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