Chapter comments on the chapter The New Moon Profound Palace of the book The Great Journey With a System

Keep your pace No need to hurry As long as you dont drop this im okay

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

it's everyone except MC is surname first then given name last.

شكرا على عملك

Why does he want to bring honor to the moon palace place so badly??

There’s no need to rush as long as you don’t drop this than it’s ok to take your time and write.

TY

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Thanks for the chapter!!!!!! Keep up the amazing work

Your rewrite of this fangic is quite good... Nicely done on the rewritten

Thanks

You should have the mc buy the red and black string puppet techniques from naruto. The fruit's power will compliment it.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter~

dropped ?

Thanks for the chapter

The village name should be just Konoha. Gakure itself mean village. Or am i wrong?

thanks for the chap...^_^

thanks for the chapter :3