Chapter comments on the chapter Off to the Phoenix Trial of the book The Great Journey With a System

This Mc is too liberal with information, giving away all his secrets for no gain at all. Not only that but I still haven’t forgotten that mess from last chapter where he gave two powerful abilities to Jasmine for no reason at all. Wanting to see what that goddess that betrayed Jasmines brother wasn’t reason enough. You should also make it so that any abilities he gives to others through the system doesn’t work on him. There’s no reason why he should of been frozen in time last chapter by a power he himself gave to Jasmine. He should also used the powers to he buys for others, might as well make the most of it after wasting the point to buy the powers.

I thought ******* looked like another girl that wasn’t even that pretty, I definitely don’t remember her looks based on Erza. If anything considering how spoiled she is she should be modeled after Rias from DXD. Maybe I’m thinking to a different story similar to this one that changes the main female characters looks to other anime girls just like this author did.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter author but we all still need more 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Make a mass release and GEt thousand of wives and more eives

this chapter the author really made the MC complain about the character plot in the cultivation novel hahahahah

why a shinobi?

Honestly though

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hey im itachi im jasmines *****

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