Reviews of Myriad Shadows by Sapphirechelsea237 - Webnovel

I love this novel very much I love it's story,characters,etc . When are you going to update more chapters I'm waiting for more chapters. Please update your chapters as soon as possible 😁😀

This review is part of a swap and I've read up to the current posted chapter 13. Updates Works for me. Writing I thought your writing improved around Chapter 9 compared to earlier chapters. There were less grammar issues, although there were some minor errors here and there which editing a few times could help. Prior to that, there were mixing of past and present tenses. There were some missing punctuations or improper use of it… For example: Original >> "It's my honor to serve His Majesty and the Helian Empire! We will try our best to keep serving the nation", claimed the General and the thousands of soldiers behind him cheered as loudly as they could! It was a sight that could inspire anyone. Edited >> "It's my honor to serve His Majesty and the Helian Empire! We will try our best to keep serving the nation," claimed the General, resulting in loud cheers from thousands of soldiers behind him. It was a sight that could inspire anyone. The comma goes before the closing quotation for dialogues (this should be done before every following dialogue tags). The part about the soldiers was a bit of a run-on. You could either place a period after “General” and start a new sentence or combine with the comma as I’ve done in the edited example. Example 2: Original >> "And make that ***** wear the clothes that I will give you. Come with me" She instructed her personal maid, Deborah. Edited >> "And make that ***** wear the clothes that I will give you. Come with me," she instructed her personal maid, Deborah. ^I saw this happened quite a lot in the story. Maybe it’s just an issue of more editing needed? Characters Empress Rosella is definitely not someone you should mess with if you can’t deal with the consequences, but it suits her position as empress. Especially with all the scheming going on from the concubines, all vying for the empress position. It’s good that she’s not submissive and docile, otherwise she would be dethroned pretty quickly. I can’t feel sorry for the emperor. Not a very bright emperor either so he deserves to lose his power lol. It’s a winner-take-all kind of game. I like Alexandria but Roman is quite ridiculous. He threatened to kill her at the thought of her being with another man? Well, Roman, you just slept with another woman and then calling your wife nonsensical. She hasn’t threatened to kill you yet. World & Story I know it’s a historical romance but for some reason, my brain kind of switches between eastern and western historical. Whenever I read the character’s name, it sounds like a western fiction to me but then all those harem fighting and scheming reminds me of all those Chinese palace dramas lol. I do enjoy reading face-slapping once in a while and seeing how all those arrogant, conniving concubines end up getting a taste of their own medicine. I hope to see more world building though because a lot of it right now seems to be catfighting between the females for the male’s attention. Overall a pretty decent read for those who are looking for harem/scheming/face-slapping stories.

"she has simply grown tired of sharing her man with countless beauties in the harem" this is a first on this website 😂 Anyway, the serious stuff now: The story is nice and intriguing and the characters really make you curious to see what's going to happen to them Keep up the good work!

The story just keeps getting better, the Empress is a fearless woman who is not afraid of peeling people's skin off and personally carving a crown on their face. Don't mess with her. Now there is a new character in sight, I wonder who he is?

The chapters are easy to read since they are ****** enough to grasp, however the flow can be a little confusing, with the flashbacks and all, and who's present at the current setting, for example I thought first that the brother general was at the palace but it was clarified that it was only a flashback. Overall, since it's easy to follow, it's also easy to get hooked. The plot is promising. I would want to know the empress' fate, and the reason behind the change in Prince Nicholas' attitude and behavior, and why he did not want to be reminded of his past. I would also suggest to define the world background more, i.e. where on earth did it take place or maybe it's a makeup world. It's hard to deduce because the names were quite western but the emperor-empress thing is quite eastern, I would say, or maybe I'm wrong. :) Dunno, just a bit confused. I like how the FL can be cold, elegant, dignified and ruthless. She's a slayer. :)

I love novels about empresses and drama so this was a win. I tHOUGHT this might have a HEA bUT FROM THE LOOKS OF IT NAH. I'm totally in love with cold MC's, and I can't wait for the ML to be destroyed. I dont want her to die but I want her to die because I want him to live life as an empty shell. I want to watch him lose everything near and dear to his heart. nO I WANT MY GIRL ROSE TO HAVE A GOOD LIFE WHILE HE WATCHES ON THE SIDELINES NOT AT ALL INVOLVED. I got hurted, I felt, I want more. Please give us more author!! ok now critique - - - Writing: Not bad, but could use a bit more polishing. I'm also not a native english speaker so I get the struggle lmao. There's just a few issues with tenses. The flow gets a little stunted (abrupt with changing scenes so its a little whiplashy) but enjoyable. Really, my maim issue is that its a lot of tell, not show. I also face problems like that in my own novel so its alright, we can only improve!! Story Development: A little choppy because of the flashbacks. Instead of the divisions, it would be nice if you used transitions instead! I love that its all taking place during the coup and tbh I wanna go and get spoilers for this book to ease by heart but oh wait no i cant bc its still ongoing :') Characters: ROSSSEEEE IS QUEEN. I WANT TO PROTECT HER WITH MY HEART AND SOUL. I WANT HER TO BE HAPPY WITH KIDDOS AND A MAN THAT WILL MAKE HER FEEL SO MUCH MORE THAN THE BASTARD. --kill the bastard pls-- all the love x

The first 6 chapters were...... absulute page turners!!! Iove the charcters and flashbacks. Also, i could reslly feel rosellas pain snd sorrow. Almost believed she poisoned herself....