Well the idea of the story is good.
But development of relationships in this novel is slow, so if you can handle the fact that mc the supposed s*x god after 50 chapters just get 2 Harem members then try this one, but dont worry author himself told us after this he will increase the speed of mc for gaining new harem members.
Hi, this is a honest review here.
Writing quality : 3/5
Update stability: 5/5
Story development : 4/5
character design : 3/5
World background: 4/5
The author is very passionate and love his work. However he is new to this. This book is atypical to ero books, with weak character designs- power mechanics and plots, but it is still a fun read. Sure around half the time the book is unrealistic and not immersive. But if you can treat this story as a pass time and not one of your favorites then, give this book a try.
IRTD is one of the hidden gems of this app. I would highly recomend this to any who like the fluffiness and live by the fluffiness. So far this story has progressed greatly and is by far one of the most enjoyable books within my library I can say the same for all of brother paranoids novels. Keep up the great work.
It's a novel for bored readers, not for veterans, it's a novel for readers who want explicit scenes of R#18 with a completely na#ive and weak MC who was just lucky enough to have the divinity of the god of se#x and he only becomes strong at the end.
So, if you have free time and you want to have Lemon scenes, this novel is for you.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
Trash story with NTR.
It was great until chapter 450 or so. After that, the plot becomes rushed.
I enjoyed it very much, compared to author's other works only this one got me interested.
I liked MC's power, it was funny and well thought out. Although after the introduction of the Ruler, it started to break, the MC powers up too quickly with little reasoning.
Is this the first Novel of the writer??? why there is no proper explanation about the scene. they just appear somewhere out of nowhere. and sometime things just happens suddenly.
It's hard for me to evaluate this book in general. The story is cool, but you often forget about female characters, especially making this separation after the battle with the cloud god, I was hoping for some great ReUnion, but even when they met, you could not feel these emotions, especially with the last 4th and 40th chapters, it was done quickly and below your style . I do not know how your other books or they have such separations so as not to think about these characters
I'm on chart 243 I don't like the fact that he left his women, I mean situations when he escaped from the continent and then, after the death of his girlfriend, he couldn't take them with him. and a bit of a hero development is strange for 200chapters
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
As an avid reader from wattpad , I just came here to have a look and I was dissapointed to find this hidden gem.
I enjoyed my read. My mind had to work to fix grammar mistakes but the story kept me interested enough to keep reading. Finished the story in about four days and the ending was somewhat quick or rushed, but I still felt happy with how the different storylines concluded.
I'm not sure why this has so good rating, at least till c80 which I'm at now you can barely even call this an story. It feel more like collection of events, we don't get actual progression of story.
To explain, we don't have character motivations and what they think, they just do things. We don't have actual explanations of why things happen, or build up, THINGS JUST HAPPEN. And finally we have barely any world building or descriptions of the environment. it feels like we are teleporting from once scene to other without any explanation.
As I said, this "story" is just collection of events, not an actual story. Unfortunately even if story gets better later on, I haven't actually seen improvement in 80 chapters I have read, even if it becomes better later it doesn't really matter much if first 100 or so chapters suck.
So because of update rating I gave this 2.4, but actual stars for story are two stars or less. I hope author improved as he wrote this long story, but unfortunately you can't just brush off first 100 chapters even if story gets better later on.
I just need one answer to start reading does it have NTR?. If yes, I will not read it it's disgusting....................................................................
A very good novel one of my favourite novels out there.
And i really like the uniqueness of the reincarnation the story gets better and better as the story progress and i like the backgrounds of each reincarnations too.
The thing i don't like was when his brother from third reincarnation raped his wife of his third reincarnation but overall the novel is f*cking good.
Enjoyed this book very much...the story keeps a good balance between fluffiness and heaviness ...(& ofc. gardening)....A good starting novel for an author.
Although the writing quality isn't the greatest it isn't bad either 3/5 for writing, character design is a straight 5/5 there's actual character development so I like it, the rest get's 5 stars as well
Can't believe the story ended. I have been reading and having fun with this story for a while. I am sure I'll probably never forget Xue Ren. Your writing did have flaws but it was also beautiful and brought out the mfouons in all characters. Thank you so much for blessing us with such a work and I'm looking forward to reading your next book!
I wish there would be a second book it starts out as mainly **** but then the more you progress through the story the better and more wholesome it gets.
Just the best snow ball. In the beginning it's and nicely rounded out, then it picks up speed. Also unlike most stories on this site the story has good pacing and isn't all about the *** scenes. Finally the mc has a working brain which for some reason webnovels have a hard time implementing.
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I'm still going to read the book, but I need exp so I'll leave the review here and change it or make a new one when I finish reading it or if I drop it
Hi, this is a honest review here.
Writing quality : 5/5
Update stability: 5/5
Story development : 5/5
character design : 5/5
World background: 5/5
it's the best although i'm only chapter 9 is the best it's my first time to read a novel but i enjoy it it only in deeper chapter is had a coins but i have no money hahaha but it's okay because it had almost 200 chapter free i'm going to put a piggy bank in my room to buy a coin..
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