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XOMatsumaeohana
This is part of a review swap valid for Chapter 18 Writing Quality: (5) (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣︿˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू) The author's writing quality is better than mine so offering advice feels awkward. This is one of those actually well written novels, with seldom any mistakes. So if you want good grammar, this story is for you. Character Design: (5)The female lead is very unique, maybe because she was raised as a guy. But I don't think that matters too much. Girls don't have to act girly, they can act the way our FL does. A strong character, but despite this she gives of the impression of being lonely sometimes. Story Development: (5) only seventeen chapters so far, but the pacing is good. The mysteries surrounding the FL background, and the build up relationship with the ML is not rushed. Instead the author takes his/her time with it. I'm interested in how the FL will fall in love with the ML considering her personality. Who will be the first one to fall in love? World Background: 5 stars for world background too, what can I say? There's no confusion at all and everything is explained setting wise. Overall; A good story that I will definitely keep in my novel and continue reading.
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soulbeholder
This story every now and then manages to touch one's heart..sometimes those beautiful lines prickle ur heart and sometimes they soothe it..writing is great...n all the characters have their own importance..everything seems to be mystery..although it feels like we can imagine the story..but when i tried to..my whole mind get messed up...so thn i stopped it...n just going with...so far..its pretty good..n well if this goes on..am hmgoing to fail in my exam..as this novel keeps me hanging in itself
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KimTaehyung3012
Dear fellow readers searching for amazing content, It is my pleasure to make it known to you, that we've have finally got our hands on the most most delightful piece of good news tonight. And that's right, you've got it, we all at last have found a story that's is no short than BEAUTIFUL. Although, the story seems to be far from developed, we all can say it's gonna be one of the most magnificent ever written. It is a gold mine of content, that doesn't attract readers with all bunch of rubbish. The character sketches are just so overpowering, it reminds me of what the Author had once said herself, that she doesn't just create characters, she lives them. And that make the same so relatable and appealing. You will not find the same 'oh-so-weak-and-delicate' female leads and 'knight-in-shining-armor' male leads. And their story is definitely not a cliché 'love at first sight'. Even then, its unique and mysterious storyline will certainly make you fall for it. The other characters are not given only the position of the sidelines, and are of equal importance, which adds to the intrigue. Its so refreshing and decorative that I'm running out of adjectives now. And if you thought THAT'S good, we're far from over. Every chapter brings out the different colors of not only the characters, but also of life. The Author teaches us the most brutal of life's lessons in the most realistic but inspiring way as possible. You will not find cheesy, sugar coated, far-from-actual 'You are the best in the world' quotes here, but drop-dead cruel but real one liners. And I don't think I will find a word in the existence of the English language to describe the Author's creativity. I mean, HOW DID SHE COME UP WITH SUCH AN EXQUISITE, BEGUILING, IRRESISTIBLE, BEWITCHING, STUNNING, HEAVENLY, AND AGAIN BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE LIKE THAT? And I'm probably saying it while she is cooking up another even better story in her amazing mind. Also, just when I think I couldn't be any more impressed, she never fails to surprise me again. The amount of research, skill and effort she put into it is pretty overwhelming. The Author is quite stable with her releases, and also treats her readers a lot. Although we all are guilty of wanting more chapters per regular, and I don't escape the crime. And beacuse of our enless demands, sometimes, (very, very rarely), there're maybe a few typos, but it's way more than worth it. She actually takes time to read out her readers opinions and values them, which was a pleasant surprise to me, I appreciate it a lot. And all of this................ was actually ME BEING HELLA HONEST. To conclude, may I say, if you fall into it, you're not gonna be escaping. Cheers, Me
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True2You
Amazing read.. keeps you wanting more and more
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Li_lee
One of the best story . But I should have lookin to the "tags" clearly before reading it. I'm crying at the end .. I need a happy ending for RU
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Chitra_Shantipriya
to be honest, it is such a masterpiece. it was not only heart touching but also reached life lessons. I loved the climax of the story. it was not a sweet love story but an idea how love should be. thank you writing this story, also l loved the poetry part[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Devilish23
Love every bit of it. The humour, the mystery and characters. Have read this a couple of times and plan to read more. Thank you sooo much. Its a beautiful story .
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DaoisttG3KuY
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LexiGryson_7781
I would like to say something to author I know I have no right to say that but I just couldn't stop myself I think Ru deserve happiness I mean more than she get in this story. from birth she never get a chance to feel loved she had bestfriend who couldn't understand her fully and when she finally get a chance to feel being loved you snatched that chance I just couldn't stop myself from writing all of this you are the best author your novel are most amazing I have ever read. but is it necessary to give then ending like this your another story I have read and that story also doesn't have like completely peaceful happy ending I would like to tell you the world is fell with treacherous people but there are also kind people who knows how to love no offense by the way.
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Smiillleeee
I don't remember reviewing this novel and even if I've done I felt like coming and dropping another review~ This one is a masterpiece ❤️ It's been months or maybe year, I don't even remember when I finished reading this novel but I can't get it out of my mind. My favourite and a MUST READ novel~
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Brenna_Harden
Story is filled with twists and turns for a strong female lead who is broken. And the love is broken as well. Can the male lead fix it? Well, what if he is part of the reason why they are broken?
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Wood_Pecker
I have read this srory twice and each time I learnt something new. I have sincere request from the author. Please write a story on the cahracter 'Zhang Han' of this book. I have a hunch that he would become a great leading character and the story you can create on him would be another amazing creation of yours. I desperately want to read his story as a novel. Please <3<3..
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Anna_Quansah
I don't understand why the author.Why I stopped writing the story this incredible novel,why?, please I implore you to just start writing it again please I would really really love to read your novel I find it hard to think of you stopping to write these book l like all those philosophies and i learn so many things from it I learnt so many things from this book. Please can u continue
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stormyfly
It's one ofthe best stories I've read so far. keeps you hooked up till the end. I do hope though that the writer decides to write an epilogue for this one. Waiting anxiously!
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ssrm_ymra
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! Read it k??????????????????
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lasnabakihsna_6
Wow this story is just wow. I mean I don't even have words to express how I felt after reading it. Even though it's been a long time since I completed this story but it's still fress in my mind as if I read it just a minute ago. Especially the life lessons the author gave before each chapter. It felt as if I am reading a professional psychology book. Even though it's shameless of me to ask you but please author give us a sequel. I know you have planned an ending like this but this poor reader can't help it but cry whenever I think of this ending. So just to make your readers happy please give us a sequel. 🙏🙏😭😭
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GNURANI
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GNURANI

this the first novel that touch my soul. superb storyline and writing which bought tears to my eyes. my heart wench for each characters in this novel. the emotions was well developed that it felt so real reading it. one of the best novel I ever read and will remember for forever...well done writer
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Kamaldeep_kaur
i can't describe how beautifull , amazing, awesome and thrilled this story is .. i enjoy every chapter and love every character in this story thank you dear author
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S_K_

This novel is wonderful! I HD an all-nighter just to finish reading this book. I couldn’t put my phone down. I came here from author’s other book Mr CEO loves the Devilish Beauty. That book made me curious about Ru that I hopped here. When I started reading this book I always had an inkling that Ru and Ren were never going to work. When I came across their brief love story I was really sad coz I just knew that it wouldn’t last long. But their love was strong, but sometimes love was not enough. I really loved the plot author but I think this story could’ve been fleas he’s out in terms of the world background. I really felt that the description of the world was lacking as Shaddowwick state was so hyped up but we knew nothing even when the novel has ended. (Though I hope you publish an epilogue or some bonus chapter author😝). I really loved the ending. It was realistic. It was bittersweet too but my mind was at peace.....ok I was sad that Ru and Ren were separated but still!! Also you mentioned that their fate traversed across time and space. Maybe they meet in another time that they could be together forever..you know now that date has played and all that was to be done is done. I was also sad about Yuan and Lilly. But it was to happen. Overall I would re-read this book...but that is not possible as I am heartbroken by the ending...I know I am being confusing...anyways keep writing author!! I really love all your works. I am reading your ongoing novels too...I am a bit of a silent reader but this novel just made me want to leave a review. Much love PS - Please add some chapters to this book. I need it!! 🥺🥺
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Lupebites967
Truly a truthful beautiful heart wrenching book. We dont always get a happy ending but we must do what's right for us and that alone is a happy ending. Truly loved it. Thank you
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Muse_

This book got me hooked before I even knew what it is about . The picture used is so different from most that it reminds me of those old books ( I'm a young lad though ) The story is so different that I just couldn't keep it down . Now that I am on. chapter 274 , I decided to take a break . Keeping the most intense suspense though feels like torture so does my burning eyes . This is the best story ever I have ever read . And I thank the author for that .
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kriya123
This is just great ❤❤ It's so wholesome I can't express my feelings in words I just love everything about this book. Although it's not a usual Fairytale that we generally read but it's too good to be true. This book shows u the reality of life that if there is somebody u love he can also be the reason for ur pain not every love story is worth completing❤❤
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Iroda_Madaminova
This book - will change your prejudices, will show you the new side of each color. The story is really sad, but at the same time it seems like a good example for us. You noticed that every time you read a book, about love, it ends so beautifully and fabulously. So and we begin to believe that love can lead to this end, but not everyone can achieve the desired, as well as the heroes of this book. Yes, they can still love each other, but the trust is interrupted, and the heart is disappointed. In my opinion, the author proves to us that with this end is not all over, they are alive. People live by air, water and food, there are also many people's needs, but there is also emotions. But do not forget that they are only emotions, and not vital factors! Here, you lost Lyumi or disappointed in it, but it will not make your heart break literally! We need to continue to live to the end, as long as we desire, we should not depend on someone or something, even from feeling. If you hurt because of these feelings and you can't forget it, then find new feelings, a new story for yourself! Even if your love is real and you still lost it, you do not need to cling to him. Love was real when you both loved and expressed it, and after it broke up it would still forget. You need to find your way with other people, maybe parents or friends, maybe new acquaintances! Just do not lose yourself into the cycle of the past, live by present time and hopes for the future! Oh yeah, the author is really beautiful! I like you very much, I like you because there are many emotions in your novels and their descriptions, what you showed the Ram a lot of his sides. I read a few of your books and all of them really my favorite ❤️❤️❤️
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bekhi
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bekhi

The story is beautifully written. The author has a way with words and that alone already makes it worth reading. The characters are unique and have so much depth. I highly recommend it as the storyline is different then what is commonly found on WN. And the mini-episodes at the end of some chapters will make you laugh like it did for me.
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arnieArapa
This book is My most favourite from the author-especially the FM -ru-everything about her is so fascinating Hope my dear author can make the sequel just to soothing my heart ha ha ha coz i want RU have her second chance with what her heart want most😍
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Archana_Achu_7777
I am madly in love with the story. it's truly intriguing and the story development through a mixture of both past and present is truly interesting. iam in love with the female lead. she is so cute with her innocent but devilish character
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Satvika_Sanya
I really want it’s Part 2 .......................................................................... I can’t bear their sad ending ........
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Sukhdeep7
I wish this novel could also have comic version[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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HuangMeiQi
It isn't your ordinary ending. It will make you think how devastatingly sweet their relationship is. But, it's a good read. It has enough scenes to swell up your emotions.
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dreamgrl
I stuck to the book from beginning to end. such a lovely book. love Ru ... hope part 2 will be there.. with Ren's life in his family and Ru's claiming if her bloodline clan
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Deeya2022
I am a person w few words...this is THE GREATEST...THE BEST...I love you Ms. Author n thank you...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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