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Felicity_Huang
A really great system story!! There isnβt really any romance yet author is taking his/her time, but the story is really funny! It is dark and sentimental at parts too and the world is cool! The valley and monsters and chasm thing makes me wonder what author is up to. Definitely a unique and fun story to read!! But more chapters pleaseeee once a week is not enough! π
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FeatherlyDuck
Haha! I loved the style that you wrote with, it felt very nice to be reading something with the comedy bits that you inserted. I loved the growing relationship between Ria and the other characters; it felt very heartwarming. Although the information that you presented in the characters' stats were a bit overwhelming, it was still a nice story to read. Well done!
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XOMatsumaeohana
Part of a review swap, valid as of Chapter 11. This is my first five star review on WN, honestly I'm just going to give praise in this review than offer any suggestions. This story has me hooked and I'll keep on reading this.
Writing Quality: (β₯οΉβ₯) You're writing is so good, I need to learn more from you. 5/5
Story Development and Character Design: 5/5 ) For only eleven chapters, the pacing is good and there's no areas that confuse me. Everything is gradually explained leaving you anticipating for more. With the intro being so dark (a bit unexpected) I started to expect more angst. But with this intro, the rest of the story flows. The characters thoughts were portrayed and described well and us readers get a insight into why the lead changed so much. Most rebirth stories involve being born as another person, this is the first where the character is reborn as a tree.
World Background: π€ The system is explained really well. I've never read a system novel before so I'm unsure what to comment on. But the author's fluent writing style helps to easily build a picture in the readers mind.
Overall: 5/5 Going to keep this in my library, keep up the good work (Sorry for the delay, I was on holiday)
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TwistedWhimsy
I'm not normally one for romance type stories, but I think this one strikes a good balance with the territory expansion and fantasy aspect of it.
one of my top 5 on this site if only compared to romance, maybe higher depending on how it progresses from here.
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...I also like the darker tones which are still 'somewhat' present later in the story, as I personally believe that the lighthearted aspects of stories always seem brighter when compared to darker ones.
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chonnie
You got me at animal contracts.
At most, I've read manga systems in the past. This is my first time reading a novel so and I honestly don't know how to think of the whole set up. Other than that, the rest of the ride was engaging!
Writing Quality:
Very good! It's incredibly easy to understand. Lines flow well, punctuation is there and used well, and word choices aren't repetitive. It's difficult to find well written original novels on here, so to other readers, thoroughly enjoy this novel!
Stability of Updates:
I have no right to complain about anyone's updates. You're doing amazing, sweetie.
Story Development:
Overall, it was well-paced. When we hit chapter eight, we come to see the beginnings of a political arc after slowly leveling up as a tree. In my experience reading this, I'm not super engaged with what's happening plot-wise? The topic is definitely interesting, but I think I need a little something faster paced maybe? I'm not entirely sure what my deal is here. It's good, don't get me wrong, but I feel like it's missing a little spice? Maybe I feel like the stakes aren't high enough for something idk?
Character Design:
I'm mostly here for the characters, which isn't a bad thing. I like the dynamic between the MC and Cardisys. I'm always a fan of those kinds of love-hate but not really kind of relationships.
"Hands off the bark, mister!" How could I not appreciate MC for that line?
World Background:
I found the beginning to be a little too much of an info dump? Then again, this is my first time reading a system novel, so it helped me understand the dynamics of it (world building is hard bc I get why exposition needs to happen).
Overall, this novel is engaging to read and pretty interesting in my perspective. I'll be keeping it in my library to see future developments :))
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GrumpyNeighbor
My brain felt like it was in overdrive in the first few chapters tbh --but in a good way. I can see how much research it would have taken to write these so I really applaud the author.
I didn't expect to like the story as much as I did but I would have to study the systems :)
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Sollkiri
The writing quality is very good and the spot on writing is really impressive. Though the foundation of the story is a sensitive topic, portraying it in a hilarious way is very interesting.
As a system novel, it still has a room to grow and the details has to be polish.
And since its a a romance fiction (sorry, not my taste really *bitter commentary*) we already have a guess on who's the MC partner.
Anyways, gonna wait for more chapters though.
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midnight_bloom
Great writing - very detailed and well-thought of. Not really fond of systems but somehow it was enjoyable and even intellectual with all the stats and how things work. haha.
keep it up. looking forward to the next events.
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Lizabelle88
Wow, as in wow! It's my first time reading a system novel. Where a level up can increase your skill after you made successful task. Interesting and it blows my mind away. I love the way the Author describe or narrate how Rialyne life become chaotic and messy as it is, poor girl! I can relate well. Such a poor girl, made me want to adopt her. Turning into a tree is much better for her I think. Being a tree she can be unique and rule her own world! Hope vengeance wont corrupt her mind much in the future! Brilliant storytelling! I'm impressed! 5 star for you Author!
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yunisao
Definitely a new genre for me but so glad I took a chance and read it. Though it only has six chapters the details the author put in is amazing. The character background and world background is amazingly detailed. The story flows smoothly and its definitely an interesting read.
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MyCharacterLeads
Thumb's up!
System + domination , sounds familiar. But the different to the others novel out there was her countenance. Why? Because she's a damn tree... (This make the novel unique)
The MC has a cool, optomistic and smart mindset.. ππ
Her calm attitude seemed like she did not experience hardship in life.. haha
Great plot.. keep it up..!π
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niharikabhol
Full marks for the amazing every that the author has put in. In the starting itself I was amazed with the level of detail you have gone in to show different levels, experience etc. Great work !!!
The initial chapter was very touching. Bullying is always a sensitive subject and something that I have detested since forever. The pain of MC potrayed is quite touching. If you think this novel is like conventional one then you are wrong. Just hold on to couple of chapters and you will automatically be proved wrong.
A great find indeed.
Great job author for writing on such an unconventional topic.
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Arelya
I canβt really give a super detailed review so far, but based on the first several chapters and the synopsis, the story is really interesting and is well written. Iβm definitely going to keep it in my library to watch it progress.
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schreient
Had a great time reading this. It gave an rpg vibe and i wonder how it'd go from here. i laughed at the vengeance points tbh. Bookmarking π
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Ellendria
I like the sound of this. It'd be cool if you actually kept this story going. Living as a tree could be very interesting. Maybe she can turn into a dryad or something? Who knows, but I'm excited for this. πβββββ
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