Chapter comments on the chapter Freak Speaks of the book Chimera Girl

This is really funny and interesting to read😁. In the third sentence when the author said 'bent', it might have been more natural to say 'bent down' or 'bent over'.

"Jazz Hands" will never fail to incite a laugh from me.

Nelda reminds me of my MC lol

A technician suddenly became a priestess.. haha Nelda was a smart one. She knew how to adjust that fast...

One if the last few sentences starts with shee rather than she

In the last paragraph, I believe it should be Nelda “reached” and “she” rubbed it.

Loll, so refreshing! I’m hooked!