Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1: Dreams of the book Ball Master

Kind of hard to follow but keep going there's not many sports books on this website explicitly one with a system

That was ridiculously hard to follow, what even happened? Flashback, went to the roof and teleported into his car? Tf?

Could you make another story of my life.....

I got confused regarding his past and present.

Love sports fics with system but it was really hard to follow your chapter. I think u really need to clean it up a bit.

This was quite hard to follow imo