Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 14 of the book Immortal Monarch (XMen)

Another masterpiece that keeps me so engaged in the story that I forget to thank the author. *sigh* It's a truly good story, thank you very much for the enjoyable ride!

Please more i love this i am not a robot

Dont stop writing. your ovel is awesome

I am a lurker. I don't comment unless a story gets me going.

he I stated it late but story is quite good don't drop it...or you have already dropped it ?

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I like this story so far. Sorry for not commenting. I wanted to comment on the latest chapter but oh well i will do that too later. You are awesome author. Keep it up.

Thanks for the chapter

Story is good. If naruto can create portals and just about anything else how would he have trouble with strange.I mean between chakra and magic it looks like the should be capable of the same things. Only thing limiting ninja are their mindsets.

I like this version of naruto , be only gives second chances to certain people and no bullshit talk no jutsu for everything

nice chapter , is it going to be similar to the previous version where he fights the Phoenix and dies and revives after devouring a planet