Chapter comments on the chapter The painful memories (I) of the book Second Chance - To Live Again

Good

Buen comienzo..

Your story is off to a great start. A little context is provided explaining why she loves him so much, which makes the foreshadowing heartbreak and betrayal even more devastating

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Good luck author. God bls.

Good start.

Good start! 👍

exp.

Nice and interesting beginning

Good so far

Interesting start dear cloudgugu, got butterflies in my stomach..thank you..

promising