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XOMatsumaeohana
Author Review - Yes this story is part of a series This is the first book, but the second book Queen Lyn was written first. Prequel: Princess Lyn : Queen Lyn Sequel: Empress Lyn The story flow won't be disrupted even if you read Queen Lyn first due to the 'flashbacks' β€’ Plan --> 300-600 Chapters (depends) β€’ Starting from Chapter 35 of Queen Lyn: Clash of Kingdoms, I'll try to mirror the chapters from here. So reading them both at the same time helps. β€’ Writing Quality: I'm not a very good writer, though my writing style has developed since Dream star beginning chapters. I still have a lot to improve on, just message me on the comments section if I make any mistakes. Or head over to the official discord channel. https://discord.gg/9Cwt9Jz
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Winter_Prison
Going to give the author five stars, I know writing quality can be improved. But in contrast to her first story she's gotten so much better πŸ‘ extra star for her efforts. Normally I break down my reviews, but since there's not a lot of chapters.. - If you've read QLCK you'll notice the contrast between the Lyn from when she's 22 and the present time frame for Princess Lyn when she's sixteen. Here we get a glim**e of the vague mysteries surrounding Lyn from Queen Lyn. Actually reading them alongside each other is quite fun, since you can connect the pieces. - The ML, on the other story he hasn't shown up yet. So I'm glad to see him at last. As usual the author does a great job describing her characters thoughts and feelings. - World Background: Only advice is to do it in small chunks, no need to rush. - This story has the potential to get into top rankings if the author maintains a balanced pace.
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XOMatsumaeohana
Updated review. A lot of revisions will be made to some scenes in the earlier chapters next year. But all of these changes will mainly be mentioned in the third and final book. As I wrote this I realized it became more of a dual ML book than a single one. To make it fair for both ML's, I want the scenes at the start to balance out more. - XOMatsumaeohana
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Karen_Gilliam
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Megumi_K
Happy 100th review author. I only just read this book and I am amazed. To think you posted this a long time ago. I wonder why webnovel does not advertise this masterpiece more? The love story, love triangle between Kazuya, Lyn and Rhys is interesting. I can't tell who she is better with since both guys are good for her.
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MaizonoYui
Initially I had no interest in fantasy romance books but this is written by my favourite author. I started to read and before I knew it I was in the latest chapters.
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Oriyasaki
Author XO has never disappointed me. I am very familiar with her writing style now. I only started reading this during lockdown, but I enjoyed it.
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RainbowPumage
I find it sad that this book was forgotten. It had a great start and potential to be very popular. I hope the popularity of the book comes back now the author is updating properly again.
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Suganohiiro
Nice book with a fresh story line different from other fantasy romance stories on this app. I like that this is a series so there will be more.
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MidnightSongstress
I saw the author post on instagram that she was updating this again so I had to read. The story is certainly turning differently than I imagined. But I do like this change.
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Re-read this a lot during lockdown. There seems to be updates now so I hope I can quickly catch up. Best of luck to the author for writing this one again.
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MyFlowerSS
This book is too underrated. Maybe because of the hiatus but it seems the author is going to update this more now so I hope the popularity peeks too.
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Honeyworks_
The authors hiatus with this book made me forget how good it was. I am glad she is updating again because the story is getting very good. My Rhys X Lyn ship seems to be sailing too.
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Catching up with this series I realize how much effort the author put into this book. It is overshadowed by her more popular work Eternal Melody, but this is a great read too.
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TruthOrDare
This is a very original story. The female lead and male lead are different from the usual cold hearted ML or face slapping FL. It focuses more on characters emotions and their bonds.
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HNLikeAc
Great, but there needs to be more chapters. I wish the author would keep updating this more since I like this the most out of her other stories.
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A4Mitsuki
This book has always given me akatsuki no yona vibes. I like the direction the story is going and hope the author posts more chapters soon. It is a very amazing story.
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A fantasy novel set in a strange timeline but I like the character development of the female lead. At first she seems meek, innocent and naive but she is not like that at all.
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Misty000
Amazing book that deserves more attention. While waiting for the author to go of hiatus for EM I discovered this other gem of a novel. [img=update][img=update]
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HarukaXTXT
Will Lyn end up with Rhys or Kazuya? At this point in the story I am leaning more towards Rhys. I think they have better chemistry together.
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RikioK
A great book I don't understand why this isn't promoted more. I hope the author can post more chapters from now on. I want to keep reading this.
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ikeram_lolampei
Thank you author πŸ˜ŠπŸ™ for this novel, it was amazing πŸ˜‰ I love ❀️ the writing quality and development of the novel. Hope u write more amazing books in the future, and once again thank you ☺️ for this novel.
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Desireeee
Read synopsis, not even interesting πŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ
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Winter_Prison
400+ chapters later, I'm glad the author is not only getting better at writing. But her characters growth surprise me. At the start the novel may seem cliche with that random kiss and realistically such things don't happen.. 🀣 At least the reaction wouldn't be to take revenge by kissing the person back. The happy go lucky ML and naive FL? That's all for show. We gradually begin to see their past, and the reason for their happy and naive behaviour. For a fantasy romance novel, the pacing is good. The romance isn't sudden despite the first chapter. The two don't fall in love right away, and seem to circle one another before truly falling for another. But along the way so many people from their pasts appear, they have to deal with the conflict of their countries fighting too. I can't wait to see how this story develops from this point.
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HikasaAna
Amazing novel. I've been following the authors works for a long time now, and her stories never disappoint. I like how the novel is not set in the past or the present timelime. It is set in the distant future and yet resembles life in the past. The characters are very unique. The FL is very likeable.
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elaha_yosufi17
Your sister in the basement and she told her that I didn’t have any of time for me anything I was just thinking πŸ€” I want it I want her and her I don’t think πŸ€”
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fatima_elhami
Your sister in the basement and she told her that I didn’t have any of time for me anything I was just thinking πŸ€” I want it I want her and her I don’t think πŸ€”
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Angela_Gibby
If this is part of a series, Where can I find the first novel? Did I miss it somewhere in the description? Oh I found it! Sorry! Didn’t see it before
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