Reviews of Revenge With The Power of Monkey King by KhanQi - Webnovel

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It’s a fantastic story though I’d rather read it as a comic to actually see the characters though the wording can help paint a vivid picture

Fast pace and it's Preety good and the story writting is good and also I like the story and that's all and also the the writing still needs some work and also the story devolment needs some work and also

i'm an big fan of son wukong so seeing an novel based on him is awesome! i hope it doesn't drop, the story is at a steady paced and it's really interesting to read.

As I understand you're a beginner writer, I'll add 2 more stars to each review score, while the review part will show my actual evaluation. Writing Quality 1: Definitely the novel’s biggest weak point. I hoped it would get better later as the writer gained more experience, but close to a hundred chapters in, and it remains practically the same. The only improvement I noticed was that you no longer alternated between Qin Feng and Feng Qin. I would suggest using Grammarly and also breaking your sentences into smaller ones. Beyond that, all I can think of is for you to get an editor and/or improve your English. Stability of Updates 5: Personally, I don't like this category, as sometimes the writer needs more time to finish up a chapter, but may end up sacrificing the quality to keep the release rate, so I always give it a 5. Story Development 2: The story moves, though there are problems with fillers. Beyond that, there’s also the MC doing things that really don’t make sense. MC meets Wukong, trains once and that’s it. I don’t think he’s ever shown training again, he simply becomes OP. Group of gangster smashed his apartment, where his mother and sister live, and said they would come back the next morning. MC, who’s now capable of beating all of them by himself, simply lets them break into his home again, where his family is, before beating them. His friend —and the one helping him in his revenge— is held hostage and MC does nothing against the kidnapper. Also, the story is set on Earth, where the existence of cultivators (friars as they are called here) is unknown to the public. That’s good and all, but then MC —who had never heard of Friars before— meets Wukong and in the next few hours he: meets some woman with an extremely rare cultivation body and witnesses a battle between two friars. Then a few days later he stumbles into a trio of friars while he was getting revenge, and also witness another battle, this one so big that destroyed a building in the middle of the city. It just seems impossible that their existences were really kept hidden for so long and still are. Character Design 1: Characters barely have any depth to them, being mostly copies of one another. Male characters are arrogant douchebags, who only know to abuse their power/wealth. Also they, and only they, feel the need for sex. Female characters exist either to engage in sex with the arrogant douchebags or to almost being raped by them so that MC can come to their rescue. Maybe one or other character isn’t such a copy, but they still lack any depth to them. World Background 2: Again, the story is set on Earth with a secret cultivator society. We are shown a few glimpses into this cultivator world, but that’s it. Review score (1+5+2+1+2)/5 = 2.2 Score given = (3+5+4+3+4)/5 = 3.8

Writing quality 2-5 because it's hard to read it too much grammer mistakes and spelling errors. Pro:the writing itself as in the plot is pretty good I did say a 4-5. Stability: 4-5pretty good So far Story Dev: 5-5 I think it suits my taste so am giving it my personal rating. Depends per person. Character Dev: 4-5 cons it starts up pretty fast without telling if the mc is a good or complete rich douche ball and somehow his perfectly alright with murdering someone without even freezing like if his kill before which so far I believe he hasnt so yea. Pros the character has the desire to dev more powerful like the monkey king which will give him plenty of chances to grow. World dev: 4-5 needs more WD but since this author seems new I'll give him a 4. Over all it's pretty good but the biggest con is it's spelling grammer which to many may be a complete turn off if not I recommend giving it a try. Ps will update as the story progresses.

For sure i w'ld like to take this opportunity to thank the author for the work done,the story development has been maverous and all i can say is I enjoyed the story thanks.

I think its an amazing story from the mc to the world building. The writing quality isn't too bad but too not good either and i hope the author doesn't drop it.

FINALLY A NOVEL WITH MONKEY KING. I will definitely read it when more chapter is out. I CAN'T HANDLE THE CLIFF HANGERS! lol but GOOD LUCK MAN

Honestly can't give a book a good review, if I have to read a sentence 3 times just to understand what the author is trying to say, author just starts using words that seem to have just been decided on the spot, that are actually words, and I have to make a decision whether it's the actual use of that word, or something random and ignore it. If he is going to do that, he needs a damn glossary at beginning. Hopefully someone working on this will give it a re-read and edit and I'd love to pick it up again, and change my review

Great Novel. Enjoyed reading this one its a master piece Fast paced Increase in strength of MC is still Low....... Let him breakthrough in next few chapters.

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fast-paced developments and hot-blooded action=good many terms are lost in translation (CN to ENG)=readable but bad arrogant MC, short-sighted MC (no long-term planning); hypocritical MC (*I don't kill womenz even the ones privy to my dad's murder bc reasons; takes in a stranger who brings trouble to his non-cultivator family and blames outsiders who have a feud with the stranger) needs more world-building MC focuses almost exclusively on revenge

I will give this story a rate based on its synopsis. It think the story is interesting, even the other reader said so. As it catches my interest, I will add this to my list and start reading it.

I usually don't read stories with male lead but this one is seriously good! The details are perfect and one can easily imagine everything instead of being confused! This is worth reading. Keep updating author!

I read through chapter 10 and will continue to read the rest of the chapters! The story is good and how the mc became powerful to get revenge is superb! Keep updating the story author!

The writing style is direct, and the story has a fast-paced rythm. The author does not spin around the matter and goes straight to the point from the very start. The plot has potential and is very appropriate for the genre, although some events ocurr in a hasty way. A pity that some sentences were left in the past tense, but it's still worth it.

this is awesome its a good read for history loves of myths i like the beginning the most where blood and rain mixed together and I think this can be elevated to something amazing if given the proper time

A lovely read with fast pacing, suitable for this genre. It has a promising plot and we are presented with an interesting protagonist with a thought-out past. Minor mistakes concerning tenses, but the story is perfectly understandable. A must-read for fans of the adventure and fantasy genre.

A good read. I read the synopsis and the first chapter. Will read the other chapters later. I am eager to know what powers he can actually use. All the best.

Great story. Driven and dependable MC. A enjoyable story who's only downfall is the English translation, whitch can be ignored. The MC dose not try and remain untainted and actively tries to avenge his father and get back what is his by birth. It is extremely enjoyable and fun to read with several characters all with emotions and desires.