Chapter comments on the chapter Perception of the book Omni-Mastery

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Luk2048
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Luk2048

I don't really understand why are first, vital fights completely skipped. I get rabbits since it was more a gag, but why not write out the first fight with the croc where he got heavily injured? After fleshing out a few combat scenes THEN you can start a diary format till anything worth mentioning happens, like... An ambush by a snake! Don't get me wrong, it's a good book but it could be better and I bet author already improved further on. Thanks for the chapter!
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Donzell_Gary
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire
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Bob_Sadler
Asking for Votes or Power Stones while ignoring any revisions to obvious grammatical errors pointed out, I'm sorry, this is enough for me to stop reading this Novel.
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El_Rasskull
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DaoistOof
See this! I just give the story: vigara pills
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animesam1
Thanks for the chapter.
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Gigith
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Gigith

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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Rextew
Thanks for the chapter 😊
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SN5
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SN5

I didn't see he is leveling up or did the author mention it?
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Arc_3120
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imnotlost
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Chris28

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop
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rolas
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rolas

Thanks for the chapter
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