I don't really understand why are first, vital fights completely skipped. I get rabbits since it was more a gag, but why not write out the first fight with the croc where he got heavily injured? After fleshing out a few combat scenes THEN you can start a diary format till anything worth mentioning happens, like... An ambush by a snake!
Don't get me wrong, it's a good book but it could be better and I bet author already improved further on. Thanks for the chapter!
Asking for Votes or Power Stones while ignoring any revisions to obvious grammatical errors pointed out, I'm sorry, this is enough for me to stop reading this Novel.
Luk2048