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Cookie4Life_
It's based on real life and is really good quality work. J hope that the MC will do soccer, basketball and hopefully long distance :) I feel like this could go on to more than 300 chapters. The possibilities and potential for this story is endless. This is my favourite story in Webnovel so far!
I hope that this type of story becomes something even more! The first few chapters could use a bit of revision, so could the contradictory actions of some of the side characters, other than that, this is great. Hopefully the author does some other stories, if he does, I would be sure to read them!
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Aluco_
This book is super cool, really interesting and original. The game concept is quite unique to in the way they created, different concept then solo levelling for exemple but still really intriguing and the plot twist are quite funny
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DaoistHerbz
The cover looks like Kageyama Tobio or Zeref from fairy tail (lol)
Lololololololololololololol man 140 characters is pure b s
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Alisha10onten
Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍
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tebone123
is very good. The art was good thought was good the characters were good and Dragons good is there a good developments in the characters Megan like very good very good very good
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Laplace20
Another novel that doesn`t really deserve such a high rating in my opinion. Concept is very interesting, but some cheap plot points such as a classsic damsel in distress or meeting, a random opponent on the train while molesting a girl, just to portray them as antagonistic characters. Also dont like the nationalistic tendencies with the rivaling countries. Audience breaking into tears at an archery event. Whole audience standing for the the national anthem at a foreign event. Actually writing out parts the national anthem more than one time as theyre being chanted. Just seems weird from my western european standpoint.
If you want another facesplapping story with a new take go ahead, but i think novels like turn away a lot of people within the first fifty chapters or so, while they cant be bothered to give a bad review.
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moi_aimer_10270905
This story is good. Keep it up. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😀😁😀😀😁😁😀😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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Meowharu
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GravyBiscuit
There isn't anything particularly good or bad about this novel from what I have read. It's slow, the chapters are short, and not much happens in them. Plus it has the cliche vitriol from one note villains and the subsequent face slaps that occur.
I can't speak for future arcs, but in the first arc which deals with archery there is very little depth given to training, technique, muscle gain and so on.
Character wise there isn't much to say either. None of them in the 29 chapters I read had any depth nor did any of them have much in the way of a unique personality.
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Ricardo_Garcia_8482
This might just be me but when I was looked for something entertaining I just clicked it by accident and I decided to red it sense I had already clicked it and to my suprise it was really good so I were you I would read this book again this might just be my opinion
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moi_aimer_10270905
This story is so good. I like this very much. I hope the author will not drop it like the other, book, *sigh* I really like that one though, I will really bash you author. But seriously, this story is so good, the plot is interesting, the background is so good, though there are times that the word is incorrect spelling but that is okay, everyone makes a mistakes. I hope that you will continue writing this.
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eatPi
THIS BOOK IS SUCH GREAT BINGE READING MATERIAL
I think the book provides a fresh take on the sports novel genre and the system genre. The only problem I have with this book are the cliffhangers.
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moi_aimer_10270905
THis story is so good. Love it very much. Hope you finish it. ^________________^ ^________________________^ ^_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________^
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Jai135
Bro great idea for a novel here. Love the shock everyone gets whenever he does something. R you going to end up adding more sports? I would love it if you did basketball or soccer. Tyvm for this novel.
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seaweedbrain_00
This book is different from the other system books I've read before. It is so refreshing and well written. 👏👏👏 The MC is also so mature that he is likable.
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sp4rt4n_ii7
Damn cliffhanger every single chapter! I’m going nuts over here. It wouldn’t be so bad if the chapter length was doubled. Longer chapters and faster updates please.
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PinnacleExistence
It's pretty good story.. grammar is good, the idea is good.. but seems it is missing something.. ................................ . .. ....
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Yasmin_Elkhazendar
Fun read but it would be so much better with more scenes including the involvement of the system i suggest upgrading the role and functions of the system
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syedsaid95
I love sports novel. Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Terrorofthedeath
Very fun story. The system itself leads to numerous opportunities for plot and the method of implements of the system makes it not so op as you might think.
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davidthornton406
King of sexy ness. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Fredy74
a story where an athlete is the best of the best, also multidisciplinary; With the help of the genes of their ancestors, it will be the best, I hope that the story is not halfway or that it becomes too repetitive, before that happens, please end it. first of all, Thanks.
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rr_mm
thank you so much for your hardwork. It's a very interesting book. I really loves how you write it and everything is a masterpiece. Good job and looking forward to more of your books!!!!!
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HazKamalBOOKWORM
It's nice super nice 😊👍👍👍👍👍 😊👌😊👍👍👌👍👌👍😊👍👌👍😊👍👍👍😊👍👍👍😊👍😊👍👌😊👌👍👌😊😊😊😊👍👌😊👌👍😊👍 👍😊😊👍👌👍👌👍😊😊👌👍👌👍 😊👌👍😊 👍
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Celinette
Yhe only novel I read about sports! And I love it. Every competition and his interaction with that Korean actress Soyeon is it? I know the romance is not the focuse of this story but if ever he starts dating I wish for him together with Soyeon. 🙇💑🤵👰
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kingminoas
A very enjoyable novel, I am having a lot of fun reading it and it's truly something well thought. I suggest that if you haven't read it yet read it. It will be worth your time.
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