An interesting story with a slow start that picks up and runs well. Currently on Ch 84 and only had one scene with a 'clique OP moment due to plot logic' however, can't wait for the next release as story is amazing so far and can't put down. Keep it up Master Author *Salute* !
Couldn't get too far into the story. nor did I get to experience too much. I might come back to it in the future, but until the author gets an editor to fix the really bad grammar, I can't stand to read it. I looked forward to reading it, after seeing the synopsis, but when reading it makes my head hurt, I refuse to continue reading it.
Meh. Too boring, naive and insipid to continue reading. The hero and his life are poorly revealed, sometimes not realistic. From the beginning of the beta-test a line of cheats begins and- No, this is too stereotyped to continue reading.
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It was good at the start but you quickly lose the drama and ******* in around chapter 40. It just has that goodie-two-shoes vibe which was off-putting. It is just unbelievable how someone can devise such a plan of creating a game studio and whatnot. It kind of reeks with privilege how the protagonist makes things look easy when the true reality isn't so clear-cut. I would say the protagonist is too naive in a bad way.
However clearly the story is nice and so we'll written. There are lots of overpowered stuff but that can be accepted.
I didn't mind the op skills but the thing with the ships and naval force really kills the typical videogame aestethic because you have modern things like elevator and security cameras mixed in with the swords and magic.
Overall, I liked it but the protagonist does not have a goal that I can root for. There is no reason for making money through a game studio, selling online stuff for real money. This is deeply problematic because 40 chapters in and the Main Character looks like some goodie-two-shoes and is very bland. He is like the perfect child with no flaws.
Found the story very bland for my liking, nothing really stood out or was interesting. Things just happened. I found the summary at the front to be really useless compared to the actually story cause the story is just very meh
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Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.
Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."
Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.
World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.
Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
It’s like reading while on a roller coaster there’s so much going on it’s hard to try and focus on the main idea of the story.. The MAIN CHARACTER BECOMES OP AS FU€K(like they all do)BUT THIS DUDE IS JUST OVERKILL IN A SENSE THAT GETTING TO CHAPTER 79 to 81 AND HE’S STILL LEVEL 1 and IS THE MASTER OF A GODDESS THAT HE DEFEATED BY USING POWERS HE SHOULDN’T HAVE UNTIL LEVEL 50...
But in all it’s a solid read took me a short minute to read and BY NO MEANS AM I SAYING THIS STORY IS BAD I WOULD REREAD THIS IN A HEARTBEAT AND RECOMMEND IT TO ANYONE BECAUSE ITS FUCKING DOPE AND IT GETS YOU EXCITED...
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actions
The characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that
Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”
My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****
I like the story somewhat but its too forced like it has no natural flow to it and then the mc does not seem like a guy with y years of experience, only when talking to npc does he remember his experience. He also finds godly stuff on his first quest a evolveing sword 2 treasure chests and 3 skill books while being lvl 1and no its the beta he was not in it so he just gets "lucky" on his first quest. The other part that make me stop reading is that he completed like 5 quests killed a few animals and hes still lvl 1 also the other players dies to lvl 1 animals/beasts wtf is is this even a game. Calculations also dont add ulike he got a skill that increases one of his stat by 10% ok but all his stats are at 0 so he is not supposed to get a boost but he still does wtf then later all his stats increase to 1. Idk maybe its just not for me or something
That earnest skill. That’s bull**** on every single level. Leveling probably on a generous amount gives you lets say 20 stat points right? So if you level up to 20 and come back to murder level one trash mobs you can become god. I like quick novels, but all the curses just make him seem like a absolute fucking retard. He played the game for 7 years and he still fails to be calm, and still acts like an immature little *****. No fucking wonder his team only made it to c-rank. Any rational human being who has a brain of any sort can make a better team with his resources. So make him an actual veteran or make him a retard choose one not both.
like it so far hope u dont drop it and continue to improve it :) hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh