An interesting story with a slow start that picks up and runs well. Currently on Ch 84 and only had one scene with a 'clique OP moment due to plot logic' however, can't wait for the next release as story is amazing so far and can't put down. Keep it up Master Author *Salute* !
Please continue this novel!!! I really like the story development which is way better than most of the novel I've read and I really hope you can continue it.
i wanted to give this an 2nd try but i just can't get past the 2nd ch,
an OP skill right at the start of the game... i mean when i first see the title of this novel i though he's going to *build* a character that's tankey with lifesteal or some kind of sustain to keep the character alive but nooo.
just give the MC an OP skill at start of the game and f it to everything else.
an point that alot of author make a mistake is that this is an *video game*. And theirs something call balanced.
you don't make some very questionable *Easter egg* type thing in the game and just give out OP thing for basically free.
this is a big turn off for a lot of people(me included)
This is actually a really good story so far >~< when I started it last night, I genuinely didn't think much of it, due to the grammatical errors and such, as well as the fact that the other 2 webnovels I've read were both really well known with few errors and stuff. But, I find this one just as interesting and in-depth ^-^ 10/10 would recommend
Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.
its just god mode 24/7 + teenage love. I just cat read this novel. If u are 15years old or less you can try it. But for anyone 16+ it will be a terrible novel.
Wat can I say,
this is just that good a novel. The story building is awesome.the genre may be the same but the story creativity takes it to another level. well 4 me anyways
don't u just love unpredictability in story development tied with character growth cause Mann.
I just hope many chapters are released in quick succession cause the waiting Is agonising[img=update]
I find this novel enjoyable to read, with lots of plots and ever growing characters. Even certain characters personalities have changed dramatically. Great Job RDREAM!
Couldn't get too far into the story. nor did I get to experience too much. I might come back to it in the future, but until the author gets an editor to fix the really bad grammar, I can't stand to read it. I looked forward to reading it, after seeing the synopsis, but when reading it makes my head hurt, I refuse to continue reading it.
Meh. Too boring, naive and insipid to continue reading. The hero and his life are poorly revealed, sometimes not realistic. From the beginning of the beta-test a line of cheats begins and- No, this is too stereotyped to continue reading.
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It was good at the start but you quickly lose the drama and ******* in around chapter 40. It just has that goodie-two-shoes vibe which was off-putting. It is just unbelievable how someone can devise such a plan of creating a game studio and whatnot. It kind of reeks with privilege how the protagonist makes things look easy when the true reality isn't so clear-cut. I would say the protagonist is too naive in a bad way.
However clearly the story is nice and so we'll written. There are lots of overpowered stuff but that can be accepted.
I didn't mind the op skills but the thing with the ships and naval force really kills the typical videogame aestethic because you have modern things like elevator and security cameras mixed in with the swords and magic.
Overall, I liked it but the protagonist does not have a goal that I can root for. There is no reason for making money through a game studio, selling online stuff for real money. This is deeply problematic because 40 chapters in and the Main Character looks like some goodie-two-shoes and is very bland. He is like the perfect child with no flaws.
Found the story very bland for my liking, nothing really stood out or was interesting. Things just happened. I found the summary at the front to be really useless compared to the actually story cause the story is just very meh
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Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.
Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."
Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.
World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.
Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
It’s like reading while on a roller coaster there’s so much going on it’s hard to try and focus on the main idea of the story.. The MAIN CHARACTER BECOMES OP AS FU€K(like they all do)BUT THIS DUDE IS JUST OVERKILL IN A SENSE THAT GETTING TO CHAPTER 79 to 81 AND HE’S STILL LEVEL 1 and IS THE MASTER OF A GODDESS THAT HE DEFEATED BY USING POWERS HE SHOULDN’T HAVE UNTIL LEVEL 50...
But in all it’s a solid read took me a short minute to read and BY NO MEANS AM I SAYING THIS STORY IS BAD I WOULD REREAD THIS IN A HEARTBEAT AND RECOMMEND IT TO ANYONE BECAUSE ITS FUCKING DOPE AND IT GETS YOU EXCITED...
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actions
The characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that
Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”
My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****Mc is so unlikable he is stupid, coward . And his past life experience is just a design. Dropped2x this ****
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