Reviews of Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad by Flat_Moon - Webnovel

Honest Rating 4. At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written. I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form. Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author. I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters. Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest points Also grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes. With that being said I think this

this was done of the most immersive and creative stuff I have read in a while. such a shame it has been forgotten.

It has a flawless mixture or reality and sci-fi while also throwing in a mix of everything else great book. It's a shame it's stopped

been reading this novel 3× and it's really, really good, except some minor grammars all in all it's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. specially the a father in marvel, I hope you continue that story, I'm a fan of marvel that's why and your plots and theme are amazing making me wanting more.

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It's a great story and I'm mainly enjoying the slice of life aspect but the action is great too!

Amazing just absolutely stunning 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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I just found this story yesterday, and I couldn’t put my phone down to stop reading it. I love it. I wish I could read more. Amazing read. wish I could write as good as you .

what can i say.

yeah it was good then I remmeberd it has a harem tag //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

From reading your novel I have to guess your a father and I got to say I love your stories especially this one and I can’t help but be jealous of how you see your daughter if it’s true but also admire how much love it show in your novel. So pls accept my deepest admires 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

very good, but the writing and lack of punctuation gets worse with time... but otherwise, very good (the story is very original and balanced), it's not those stories, but very good to spend time with someone sweet moment. stability 1 star for withdrawal from history

Is this dropped?

Plz update

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This novel has everything the right amount, a good amount of fluff, a good amount of romance, a good amount of plagiarizing, and a good amount of revenge.

is this novel dropped or in haitus.............................................................................................................

Noice. More chapters like ch 70 and 41. They are hot af. This is Fire and pls upafte faster. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is the best. :) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

stability of updates is my only concern and as of right now i don't know if its dropped or not. Author san pls tell us if its dropped

honestly i just started reading because i wasn't finding anything else after the first chapter lol don't drop please ---------------------------------------------------

Author,please not dropped this amazing history I really like your fic,so please don't let down I know it will be a little bit difficult to create content,but don't give up I appreciate your efforts Keep going I like to see in some time in a long future the end of this amazing novel,so please continue whit this great and original history

Went here to read because of cool sypnosis. Went here to read because of cool sypnosis. Went here to read because of cool sypnosis. Went here to read because of cool sypnosis.

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dropped chapter 8 for following reasons 1 MC keeps saying how terrible his fitness is at only 15stone. 25 -30 ye I could see overweight but not at 15 2 the magician thing in a world with superpowers isn't impressive, 3 shadow thing was totally inconsistent with previous chapters it was difficult to understand what the **** the author was thinking if author had just stuck with slice of life novel with MCs odd jobs and raising kid would have been a way better read and using past knowledge to become successful . instead desides to add super powers ruins story, original owner of body is meant to be a highly trained person that isn't shown at all. so much potential ruined by attempts at being different My opinion

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