The story is a bit good on the early start of the story but a bit hastened first few early chapter ending, my only concern is only few which maybe sudden anti-climatic ending unless the Author has brilliant way to twist the plot to extend the story further or it would bit short story (I hope that would not happen)
even so with respect I would still give a good respond, With Respect Mirragez Author of War of Ages.
Synopsis is eye catching....
Writing quality is very nice đź‘Ś
Story development is also good and story background is well designed & characters are well defined.....
Keep up the good work ! đź‘Ť
Mirragez