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ISN
just dont drop this bro....................................................................................................................thats all
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NewManagement
Hard to follow, constantly changing the talking styles and adding emojis. If you can stomach that plus broken / hard to read English give it a try. Failed reading it twice
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undercontrol
its like a kid going into hyperactive mode because he ate too many sweets the story is interesting but the emoticons are really hard on the eyes like really, really , really annoying!! , good luck with the writing but just please turn it down a bit on emojis and don't jump from one thing to another rapidly just take it slow (the p.o.v I mean) focus on one thing at a time
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Shallow_vernal
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Paladium
This story has a lot of potential to become a famous fanfic and I hope this story does not dropped
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Venerable_Raon
Take your time with the story and don't rush it. I've seen many a novel where the author felt pressured by his readers to quicken the pace and ended up being dissatisfied with the way it turned out. I would hate to see this novel get dropped or enter hiatus.
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