Please don't make the merging of the two be an excuse to just go with the plot or make events for the sake of the plot like the treasure room incident or his lack of empathy with mudblood or the constant desire of attention from his father make him do bad stuff and idiotic please dont do this things because if you do he will become second draco so please no this in the end just a suggestion and it's your story so you can do with it whatever
Uh, havent seen a new fic about draco in a while, last one I saw was good at the beggining, but the shenanigans of him being nerfed/overpowered, fight over having or not a harem and adding extra reincarnator villain ruined, hope the same doesnt happen with this one. Also I hope the mc isnt too afraid to change the plot.
I hope the plot isn’t as straight forward as the MC thinks. There is a huge difference between knowing a few key events from movies and books to real life. The slightest difference in an action on a certain day could change the plot entirely. Unless ‘fate’ is ensuring that they are fixed points in time? I look forward to seeing how this goes 😁
You said he is baby and how a baby think make his father proud 🙄I really dont understand!!! And house elves take care of him!!! House elves really don't look like humans you need to correct this mistakes 😑 If I really see house elves first time in close distance it will scare **** out of me😱
Rereading, saw the word payed, and googled:
Paid vs. Payed
The past tense of the verb pay is paid for the majority of its senses. In fact, paid is sometimes used even for the nautical meanings of pay. But you can’t use payedfor the non-nautical senses of pay.
So there you go. Sorry if I'm being annoying. That kinda stuff jumps out at me. Although the first time around I was so engrossed it slipped right by. Love this novel. ♥️
I really appreciate you truly trying to understand Draco as a person and where he came from. Really humanizes the character and allows us to understand him better and feel more connected to the story
I would be more surprised if his lack of empathy towards mudblood and his arrogant and hateful attitude disappear because it’s Draco you know! Even if he is 6 years old it is enough time for his parents to teach him stuff. Don’t get me wrong I love Draco he is one of the best character of hp.
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