Ohh... This is a shameless review for my own novel to promote its rating. But since i am posting it, I guess I should tell something about the story.
Mc is what you might call a normal person on earth, just a normal person with strong sexual desires. He is smart enough to plan around and manipulate things and someone to be on his favour...
I was quite turned off by the story the minute the MC started to sass god shortly after dying. This just got reinforced the more I read and seeing how his harem comes to be and how he treats them finally made me drop this.
This is 100% pure wishfullfilment and worryingly close to what I’d consider a SI so lets just be happy that author has no authority or powers to exploit, seeing his view on women.
While I do like a ruthless and evil MC, this has such poor execution that it leaves just a taste of disgust and disappointment in your mouth.
well good concept and start but it becomes worse in every chapter 😕.
Mc acts like a psychopath and does worst things to his loved one😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕 not recommended to those who don't like story like this. This has NTR so .......
Writing Quality : ☆☆☆☆
Updating Stability : ☆☆
Story Development : ☆
Character Design : ☆
world background : ☆☆☆☆
I removed my last review. i thought the story is good but after half story it becomes garbage. it looks like author wanted to finish the story faster but couldnt find anything. and also the MC personality later is also to arrogant.
Overall it's a good fanfiction but it would be better if MC had not killed his own parent's and ****ed them..............................................................................................................................................
Pretty shallow story, that has almost nothing going for it. It's a pretty mindless Harem story with mediocre r18 scenes.
To me its not really readable but your milage may wary.
It mostly follow cannon events with a few jabs here and there. Nothing new atleast from what I've read.
The English is okay. Plenty readable, but still quite a few errors
The story is currently dropped so updates who knows
The world is dxd so you know what you get
Characters are pretty shit. They have paper cutout personalities. The Mc is usually over compensating the kind that act like an alpha to protect his fragile ego. But in reality he is just an insect. He lacks any subtlety what so ever
What an unlikeable mc, hard to get past the first few chapters and everything that comes after is equally disappointing. I enjoy evil characters but they have to have some greater purpose whereas this guy just sucks
I would rate this 22/100.
Though I prefer a dominant alpha mc, this guy was just a asshole. The character acts bipolar. There wasn't any character building.
I do not recommend.
A really stupid work and the author attempted to get support for only posting r-18 chaps on his pantheon page lmao he thinks he is the only author who make r-18 chaps hahahaha really funny
Really good beginning, but the story and character development goes downhill the moment canon plot starts.
Dialogues are cringy with the whole (name)-tan bs pet names.
The MC is unlikable to a certain degree, i mean he seriously stole Grayfia from his caring brother, it would've been more tolerable if Sirzechs was a dick to him or something.
He dropped this fanfic.
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At the start the story was really interesting and then author went to **** up the MC's character. Made him kill his father and elder brother that brought him up. I love the ntr and stuff but it's just too extreme
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Over the story, the MC keeps going bad then worse, dark then darker still. Quite a dark story line. At one point he even takes his own mother. I understand he is a devil, but still its going too far.
It really was great. Please make lady pheonix, seekvaire agares and all the girls in izashi's harem. Please release the next chapter soon. Why don't you make izashi the ruler of everything, including the underworld.heavens and the earth.
EvilLord04