Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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Dark0_0King
*sigh, I can only say is pathetic. Just from reading this I know at least 25% of the story, its starting to get common. Mc gets reincarnated in dxd, train hard, interact with a devil, have relationship with the devil faction. I don't know if the mc is dense or arrogant just because he knows the plot in the story. He should remember he is going to interact with devils which is also manipulative, arrogant, giant poles one their a**. It would be best for me, to create your faction the throne of heroes which consists some descendants of heroes or you summon some heroes. Really, its like you are giving the devil advantage where they make a deal and you think about it then you agree and back to the plot. I am also guessing you met the trash (issei) you train him, you became weak because of attachment and only become strong because of the power of friendship/ or you just reveal your true strength when someone precious injured or die because if the mc ignorance.
1yr
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AliefLucas
I like sona better than rias....🙁
1yr
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The_God_Asura
Good has been a good read so far .... Goodbye .... Not worth continuing reading ....
1yr
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GooDName
rias spoiled princess. While she is young, let Ms give her a couple of slaps in the face, understand that she is not omnipotent
1yr
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fearlessj2008
great story so far keep up the good work.
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Dhaliwal2
People wanting to read DXD fanfic without main characters in it is just plain stupid. It's the characters who make DxD so likable. DxD is not DxD without Rias and Issei and others. You people might as well read original rather than DxD fanfic.
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Genist
you don't say 'indefinite potential' because indefinite is only used as a duration of time. In this case it'd be infinite potential. Also, there's no way the Gremory have Gravitational zones like Jason does. Just look at their training resort, 0 training equipment. Jason just agreed to align himself with Gremory for absolutely 0 profit on his side while the Gremory will be able to brag that they got 2 powerhouses to train/spar with their heirress.
4mth
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KillerofQueens
Goooodbye, JoJo!
9mth
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Joeseph_Hays
your translations into english keep switching the gender pronoun on the characters, other than that a very enjoyable read. I like that your having fun with your writing.
1yr
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MADNES
My brain cells die every time I read Mc logic... Its so stupid. Its doesn't make sense. Its so forced..
1yr
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reseter18
Disappointing. Another cliche route.
1yr
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Omnislayer
Every common DxD Fanfiction, including this one. Always Made a good relationship with Devil Faction. I wonder, why not Fallen Angel ? Angel ? Youkai ? Japanese Mythology ? Or other Faction ?
1yr
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World_Atlas
Thanks for the chapter
1yr
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Radista
whoa! this is almost same with new life in dxd! the route of it's plot I mean!
1yr
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gammbel
thanks for the chapter
1yr
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DaoPursuer
Thanks for the chapter!
1yr
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Doys24
Thanks for the chapter
1yr
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Dragon129
Thanks for the chapter
1yr
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Wh0kn0ws
Thanks for the chapter
1yr
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Undead_Shinobi
Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter
1yr
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