Chapter comments on the chapter Medea (2) of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

... I thought I was reading a BL ... Even my lil bro didn't wake up...

Author-san great chapter can't wait for more and well done with medea and MC's first time like this

Author,the only problem you got is him for man and her for woman.It's kinda confusing,hope you fix it if you can.

Good chapter Author-san there are a few tidbits but its still good BUT can you atleast look at him/hers in +18 chapters its kinda disgusting when I read the word "his womb" you know. I'm not sexist but I'm not gay either. Btw Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter

Great chapter today, though there are some wrong grammar Author san will you pls edit and double check "he, she, his, her, him, hers" the grammar I almost thought jayson is f*cking a gay😞(Sigh), you have to seriously fixed it. Its al for you author san to train your grammar I know its notnyour first language, and me too, english is not my first Therefore its up to you, and you will be the one who will get benefits by fixing your grammar as you will see your mistake and learned from it. No matter what thatnksnfir the hard work

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Thanks for the chapter

Wow, i can feel on your writing..

Não sei pq mas lembrei da cena do Thanos dizendo "O equilíbrio perfeito" kkkk

Pese a que digas que es tu primera ves escribiendo algo así en mi opinión lo hiciste muy bien mucho mejor que otros que en cada 2 capítulos hay escenas H espero que sigas mejorando estaré apilando

Now Thats A LOT of DAMAGE!

exactly its not a good enough to wake our lil bros but the story is good

Now. This is what i am looking from fan-fic

Everything's good but more dialogue between them

You're a virgin, aren't you. 😏

Thanks for the chapter :D☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜

Thx 4 the ch