Chapter comments on the chapter The day after, meeting his kouhai of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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You need to add -ly or -ing (the 3 tenses past/present/future) and you need to correct the how the character address each other like him/his/he for men and her/hers/she fo women.

Well, Issei become pervert after Irina leave him behind and meet pervert old man

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Jason: (kissing Medea) Issei: (Mate behind a tree) Jason: (turns around) Enuma Elish !!!!

"Rise of the demonic dragon" is not a faction name if we compare it to the devil faction and the Hero faction it has no relation

Take the boost gear it would be a wast in issei and it could help the Mc in the future greatly. There can’t be two mc in the story it ruin. Also the mc can take any interest gear for himself.

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Give him the talking Excalibur in soul eater 😂😂😂

that your second servant was Mordred because I would like to know how arias rasionaria see escalibur rotated Mordred and what he thinks of the family of arthuro xd

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Give hime oda nobunaga NP. Anti - Divine and Anti - Demon is really helpful. Or Paralceus sword, we got medea for age of gods and we got paralceus for west elements

Ty for the chapter :3 More plzz :v

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Yo change the canon in this novel also make grayfia virgin and she become one of Jason woman

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Thanks for the chapter Keep up the good work Need more chapter

Issei is a dumb piece of ****