Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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The_God_Asura
I lost interest * Sigh * .... (Not worth continuing, basically the protagonist is going to be a beta MC, seriously who would let any random woman hit your face ?, Well I would not let ... * Surely I would deviate , or held the hand *)
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Raishi
IMOUTO IMOUTO IMOUTOOOO!!!! IMOUTO FOR LAIFUUU!!!... Thanks for the Chapter though! XD
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Umbra_Fenrir
The new one is better I think
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kuuhh
LV 6

kuuhh

Damn will we need to suffer from this issei. He is as irritating as in the original work huu
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SetteXIII
It's just me that imagining Medea calling "Hubby" feels ticking off? She's a Witch who has lived for who knows how long and just because she "married" someone she would call then like that? Doesn't matter how I think this isn't her character.
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timepiece94
Iblike the first format
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DaoistLimitless
Thanks for the chapter :D☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜☯️🐜
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Hwanje
Thx 4 the ch
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DragonkingKyo
thanks for the chapter
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MadChop
thx for the chap!
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Taitiruk
Thanks for the chapter
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_FBI_Agent
What a dumb chapter
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World_Atlas
Thanks for the chapter
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LeafDragon
Please add her to the harem
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Ereshukigal
Ty for the chapter :3
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CeruleanSea
Thanks for the chapter
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Immortal_Cat_Akumu
This is the better dialogue format for a book however if you have a scene with alot of dialogue you may want to just add the speakers name afterwards in brackets. But you haven't needed to care about it so far. Good job on the transition it just reads of storyness now less playlike. ~ Akumu, The Semi-Immortal Cat
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