Chapter comments on the chapter Conversation in the park of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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This is the better dialogue format for a book however if you have a scene with alot of dialogue you may want to just add the speakers name afterwards in brackets. But you haven't needed to care about it so far. Good job on the transition it just reads of storyness now less playlike. ~ Akumu, The Semi-Immortal Cat

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The shield will not withstand a demon attack of the ultimate rank.

AND THE STRY GOES LIKE THIS JASON SPEN HIS SPARE TIME USING RHO AIAS JUST TO INCREASE HIS MANA/PRANA

(Jason: “this fanfic is the best”)

Koneko or kuroko mc take to harem!

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Grab the glove and go out, as if nothing had ever happened ...

Persobally, I'm waiting for the fanfic where the MC has had it with the perv and gelds him.

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Author make a story where grayfia son was actually son of another woman of sirzechs and grayfia is virgin I want you to put him as one of his harem and kick out issei don’t follow the canon

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