Chapter comments on the chapter Elemental Dragon (2), Ashura Soul of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

Hmm it feels too rushed. Welp i think this novel ia gonna end soon.

Is it a drain? Everything developed systematically, and eventually ended abruptly? Hmm ... I did not expect this when I started reading this novel.

Thanks for the chapter

What was that at the end?

great chapter keep up the good work.

ight im done with this novel, could be for others but not for me liked the concept of fate system but everything is rushed what a waste of time mc is on the borderline of beta male

Amaterasu and Susano, Really?

Jason yang menyusahkan, ngebangkitin kekuatan aja, sampe nyusahin orang lain.

Thx 4 the ch

Oque foi aquele parágrafo final da novel??? Author-sama

thanks for the chapter

Cute daughter I can feel brother in the air

He's stronger than orphis. Game over, Nerf plz. Don't have to bother with factions anymore just wave ur hands in the air like you don't care and everyone will die.

"Why do I feel oni-chan want to fck me?" Kaida asked with an innocent face. u should add this :v

thx for the chap!

thx

X3

exp

keep it up

I hope for more chapters