It became boring to read, some kind of everyday life has become. And you want to make Toby the main character. Che for garbage eeeeeeee ..... Before that, it was interesting to fight and all that and then the garbage became. Even the interest was gone. The main character faded into the background. Your words are gone.
Please don't change your story for the sake of the bored crowd. Keep releasing steadily, and we'll be here to see where it goes. Your characters have flavor. (Even if some people really cannot stand the flavor of dense young male.)
YourMyBitch