Are you tired of all the video game stories with a stupid male lead? Then jump right in!
Tags: Video Games, Action, Adventure, Game Elements, VRMMORPG, Female Lead, Strong Lead, Smart Lead, Romance, LitRPG.
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So far so good. I liked it. Though some stuff is repetitive, but necessary. It's how the story flows. So that being said I would like a little more before hand story. Like how did she get trapped in a virtual reality game? Is it all in her mind or was she sucked in the game...
You don't see many female mc vrmmo stories, so I felt I had to check this one out. It has a mc that becomes super op, super quick. I've enjoyed the story thus far and I'm excited for its continuation. Keep up the good work author, loving it. :)
Yeah really good story can't wait for more! First read it on RRL then found it on here some sml changes but all in a positive direction so looking forward to what's going to happen.
Good job with writing this. Hope you keep on writing more because you'r good at it. Just check your grammar and stats a bit. One of the only good mmorpg novels that is still updating so keep doing your best. But if you dont feel like it take a day of. Dont want u to stop writing :)
The story is interesting.
I have read a lot of system type/ game novels and this feels similar to some popular ones(not that it is bad) but again its difficult to write something VERY original.
The character are different and feel real( not a fan of killing characters though).
Writing was good and the story was also captivating!
Overall this was good and I can't wait for more chapters
(This is just an opinion and you can ignore this but please no more killing, i started to like Rick)
Really like this one.. and i really really reeaallyy am tired with all the video game stories that has a male lead as the MC.. i hope the author keep writing this story.. don't stop please.. wish u all the best :)
Daishouri