Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1: The failed proposal of the book The Ladies Gang Puppet Leader (18+) (Warning: Explicit sexual content)

Hm... well. So far. The... MC is actually pathetic. He has no qualifications to marry her. He. Well. He kinda feels like a male goldigger rn. It doesn't Even feel like He has any feelings for her, a well. Hmmm...

I got bored in the middle of the chapter and scrolled down to see if i missed anything

Thanks for the chap! Pretty good so far!

Shush and read the damn book😂💀it's pretty good

Chara development, hoping...

Hats off to the MC's courage to confess, the nervousness and everything was very clear, that's some nice storytelling

Nice story. I think, I will enjoy reading it

Curious to see what comes next.

OMG

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At least be aware if your surroundings

xp

twist ending, I did not see that coming

love it

Speed reading (scrolling) can save you time from boring pathetic useless main character thoughts. Average plastic puppet. All we got here. What's his motivation? Circumstances? Why he cares about her family's wealth if they are friends? Nothing. Save your time. Skip this chapter.

Thanks

Hahahahh 😂, this laughable what? Meg!!! This guy is sounding Iike a chicken already....

I was thinking of a hundred different ways she would reject him or how it would fail( including postponing, bullies getting in the way or ntr) But I didn’t expect this

Reading the title first and be like: oh boi Reading the chapter be like: oh boi, oh boi, oh boi

Wow that's cool