This novel is great, when you read it you can find yourself lost in the book's world and only become more immersed as you read on.
The writing quality definitely deserve 5★
It is clear and able to deliver the meaning of terms needed and convey the emotion of every scene from the heartwarming interaction between the siblings to the funny conversation between the FL and ML.
The stability of update are always punctual so I'll give 5★
Story development! *Slam 5★* if this doesn't deserve the stars then I don't know what would. The story are flowing smoothly, easy on your imagination, and there are no needless details (to me anyway)
Character design 5★ personal vendetta against riajuu aside, the characters in the novel are clearly depicted and let you imagine them with ease. Don't fantasize them too much tho you might ran into a pole.
World background deserve 5★ uwu. Be it the beautiful original world of Alinea, the realistic modern world of Ara, both have solid foundation on how they are and have a down to earth condition that will satisfy you.
If you like adventure, a touch of romance, a taste of a well-developed world, interesting characters including the side ones, clever writing and pacing, nearly sparkling grammar, and a fantastic story please consider reading this novel even just the first few chapters to see if you like it! I really enjoy it and think this is a very special novel.
Starting from an adventure that feels like you’re listening to a DnD campaign and then we switch over to modern day Japan it’s so unexpected but so wonderfully executed. The story and lore are well crafted and the author does a great job using Japanese language to immerse yourself a little deeper than surface level into Japanese culture (but don’t worry they explain all the words if you’re scared of reading romanji!). The author knows how to pace and once you start reading it will be very hard to stop.
The characters are really well developed starting with the FL she is strong, just, and charming. She is a character that you want to root for as a lead and you really feel that she will be able to accomplish her goals and tasks she sets out to do.
The ML is little interesting as doesn’t act like a human so he’s a little clumsy but he develops quickly to really get to know and appreciate our FL.
The side characters are charming and they develop well too - I honestly would be okay for some spin offs for most of them because they are so interesting!
All in all if you read this far you may consider trying those first few chapters of Alinea. I hope I convinced you. :D
Best story in webnovel... I haven't read a story before when everything is on point... It started out as a transmigration story but it is much much deeper.. It was a bit confusing in the beginning but as we read everything becomes clearer.... It is a lovestory spanning many many centuries of two star crossed lovers and hopefully how they break the curse.. Every character in the story is well thought out and the way the story is presented is quite different from what you have seen in other stories..
The story was very refreshing and had a pecry Jackson vibe in some parts, and is a highly recommended read.. Well done dear author.. Im glad I started reading when almost everything is unraveled otherwise I would have died wating for chapters to come out.
It's refreshing since its a mixture of two world's like one world dilemma isn't enough.The Female Character did not disappoint even though the modern has some problem but with the new owner I'm sure her problems will dissolve one by one.
Well written story with interesting plots. This one of the best book I’ve read in webnovel. The story is not just entertaining but also educating as it introduced the places in Japan. Look forward to reading more stories from author-sama. Thank you and well done!
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Hi to my fellow readers and Author-san👋,
I’be recently found this book during the 7 Day reading challenge and totally fell in love at first, second, third... site.🥰 I can’t express my joy when finding such an awesomely written story. I’m not finished reading it yet but I wanted to say thank you to author-san and I support her on her works. Love you lots!!
Would you believe that I'm only on chapter 6 and already loving this novel?!😍 It's the first transmigration novel that gives me a good back story to the MC before they cross over, and I have a feeling this FL will be a badass! Plus setting is in Japan 🇯🇵
Absolutely loved this story. The way how everything came together was just perfect 👌🏾👌🏾. Loved the FL, ML and side characters. Definitely one of my favorite romance/fantasy. Give it a try you will definitely not regret it
I came across Alinea 6 months ago. Read the synopsis and couldn't resist reading the book. The Strong Character of the FL is what attracted me the most. The story development is commendable. It's beautiful and you're gonna love it! ❤
PERFECT!!!!!!!!!. It's all I can think of. This book is just awesome in its own way. The author took paibs, challenges to write, but her imagination is unending. The images created in my head were just right until the end. You're an amazing writer
Argh can anyone tell me when will they know of each others power? Im really at the edge of my seaaaat. Good God hahahahaha I really want to know their reactions. thinking if each other as just a human is ugh
This story is AMAZING!! Like a hidden gem. Even though it feels like another transmigration and same time it’s not. It’s very interesting with fantasy and romance. It kept me wanting to read more and more. Thanks author for such amazing story!! I will definitely check out your other story!! 💕💕💕💕💕💕
it's so awesome u know to read a story that i so superb,amazing,etc. i just cant find enough words to describe the story. it's mind-blowing. i recommend this book to all readers who love a good story. u will be hooked after reading it. it's just so damn good i cant stop praising it.
It's like pizza overload pack with action, romance, suspense, horror and comedy. I missed the camaraderie of the characters, I was waiting for updates when I realised its already finished. I need to move on to book 2 already. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍😘😘😘😘😘😀😀😀😀😀😀😂😂😂😂😂
Due to the fact that I didn’t start reading this until just recently, it surely was a coin guzzler to be able to read to the end, but I was well worth it. I’m actually glad I didn’t stumble upon this novel seeing as it was already competed. Honestly, this story is so well rounded that I surprised me as one’s really difficult to find in the many novels on this site. Major difference from those commonly seen, only containing face slaps and love rivals at every turn, which I have to say is a real drag to read most of the time if not done properly.
The love story between the MC and ML spanning over a millennium was both tragic and touching and it was quite hard to restrain myself myself from having tears fall at several instances. The side characters as well deserve their appreciation as well as they were very well written and easy to fall in love with.
Other than these points, the mythology aspect attracted me the most as I’m a major fan of such things. Especially so being as my favorite book series would have to be those related to Percy Jackson, so this read was more so of a treat for me.
Am a addict fan.... Thank you for a wonderful story in Alinea... It is a very good fantasy story... Those who have not read it yet... I advice you to add it to your library and download it then start reading...
A roller-coaster of emotion while reading the story and now that it's nearing the end of road I'm hoping for a happy ending... I love the characters... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️