Reviews of A New Chance by BobDoSomething - Webnovel

The gender bender stuff ruined it for me, also you seem to randomly cut sentences in half. For example: If I don’t like something, I’ll stay away from it. It gets really annoying, one sentence doesn’t need to be split in two different lines.

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İnlikenthe ideanof being Gilgamesh cuz i was searching for a novelnwho has him as MC so yes but he should be arrogant and i mean gil does not have a goal he just does what he wants İs there another novel where mc is Gilgamesh or like Gilgamesh?

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Wow, I think this is one of the most horrible fan-fic I've ever read it's so cringe 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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MC is a cuckolded dude, he only take care of tsunade but he leave her, later she find him with her already have a lover. MC just a cuckold adopted big brother of tsunade. I'm so broke now that my time was wasted on this junk.

I actually like this syory so far and i do wish for you to keep writing this story and i like how your devolping the character so far and how you have a brother and sister relationship with tsunade.

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I would be honest. Your concept is not bad. The only big mistake was send MC to Naruto World.. If you want to make MC rampake and do as he wish, Just send him to apocalypse world. Such as Resident Evil, High school of the dead, walking dead, or even "God and Devil World". Which moral already gone in that's world.. And you could do as you pleases.. You could even kidnap all woman and make them your breeding live stock. Or your Slaves.. And make you own empire and the slaves would be your subject..

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I like this novel and I feel that there is even more room to improve, time is all that you need. Not all people who write a story here start like a pro writer, what's important is that you have the will to improve step by step. I'm gonna follow this story till the end : )

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Honestly, the story was going well, but no matter how you try to explain to me how the protagonist has problems due to how he grew up, in history we are told how he is besides being otaku, which helps to create principles due to having so much reflection in certain stories, it is also someone who prayed to God. Someone like that started killing everyone for no reason. There's no way I can keep reading this. And about the fact of wanting to change the history of the worlds that it goes, even with superior beings observing these worlds, which I do not think should exist, but since they are copies of the original world, there is how to interfere at the request of these higher beings .

If not for the personality of the mc, it might've been one of the good novels but what can you do? The mc was bullied all his life and after transmigration he becomes the ultimate bully and murderer because he wanted to. A very gloomy story, awesome powers but you made him too agressive. You could say that the mc damaged your story.

I am the one who sees the truth. Lakalallalalalalaalalalaalalalalalalalalalaalalalalalelrrllalalalalaalalalalaalslslslalaalalalalalaalslalalalaalalalalalalalalalalaalalalalaalaallalalaal.

MC is a retarded f**k. The ROB who granted him his wishes warned him that fking up canon plots of worlds that he travels to would bring down the wrath of other higher beings. What does MC do? He fks up the naruto world before canon even begins. Worthy of a dog that courts death.